Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Bonnie & Clyde chap1

Sunday, September 5, 2010

Beginning a new story fic. Well, not exactly new……more ongoing. Still just an idea I’m playing around with…..BP

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2481    RATING: 10.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

Tweet

Bonnie & Clyde

Chapter 1

Death Nail-Agent 453-21-768 _ played by Christoph Waltz (Colonel Hans Landa ** Inglorious Basterds)

_________________________________________________________

Agent 453-21-768 viewed himself one last time in the mirror. His dark, double breasted uniform shown well in the defused light of the officers cabin. The string of metals that adorned his chest glimmered and sparkled as they reflected their shine of gold and silver.

He put his cap on over a stock of thick, dark brown hair, graying at the sides a little, yet the officer cracked a smile at the thought of that touch of silver having the cadets and lower ranking personnel snap their salutes and hold their poses just a little more ridged as he walked by. He always got a giggle out of that, at least on the inside.

Commander Death Nail, always had the respect of every man and woman aboard ship. He couldn’t enter the ship’s galley without the entire room jumping to attention. Even with food in their mouths, not one of them dared chew until the commander was seated and began to dine on his own meal did the galley resume it’s normal activity of conversation an sounds of utensils hitting plates.

Commander Death Nail, an agent of Parliament, and an officer held in the highest regard had been ordered to the Alliance vessel “Sky Witch” for two reasons. The first was for discipline. Sky Witch, it seems had become less productive and more passive in it’s pursuit of keeping law & order in the 3rd quadrant of the Unification territories.

Admiral Sheer was being given his final chance at straitening up his crew, a crew that had come of age after the “Great War” so their discipline was nowhere near what a true soldier of the United Forces of the Allied Coalition should be. Agent Death Nails presents aboard vessel had not only had it’s crew garnish the respect for a war hero, his presents tunneled into the mind of their worst fears.

At only the expression of a glance, or the murmur of a spoken word, and any personnel, with

Comments
Monday, 06 September 2010 23:09
I like the Bonnie and Clyde reference to Simon and River. Well done....can't wait for more
Tuesday, 07 September 2010 01:50
Hello Angelle

Glad that you like the first installment of “Bonnie & Clyde”. This story arc weaves into the netting of the Death Nail story line, which was posted a few weeks back. I wanted to get the idea I had on this story line posted before I started working on my own Firefly ( which is silver, has 4 wheels, is sitting in my driveway, and resembles a Chevrolet pick-up truck…ha….ha)

Anyway , pulling from the history books of “Earth That Was” is a great way to light the candle of ideas. I often find a strong title to a story first, then try to come up with something written that will match it. That may be an odd way of writing ( and not always the case) but is how it happens sometime.

Thank you for the feedback. Means a lot. Also I’ll be posting the final to “Tucker & Dale vs. The Mars Girlz” tomorrow. After that I may have to spend a little less time writing, and a bit more fixing things around the house……..you know how it goes…..

Again, thanks for your post, take care!

BPZ

Post Your Comments

You must log in to post comments.