Blue Sun Room FICTION - DRAMA

The Losing Side, Ch. 63 - The Art of Insanity

Sunday, May 4, 2008

Mal may have more then he bargained for in Cody Patton, the mysterious and potentially deranged artist in his housing unit. Is the one real war criminal among them a threat, an asset, or just a damaged young soldier?

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Cole held another sketch book, thick with leather binding. He handed it to Mal wordlessly.

"What's in this one?" asked Mal.

"Stuff – I think you might like to see. I drew them in the protection unit – one of my guards gave me the book."

Mal retreated to his bunk and opened the cover. The first drawing was from inside a small cell with bars across the top half of the door. A guard was standing outside, drawn softly, out of focus. In the foreground in crisp focus were the bars, and into the slot for a meal tray was the book, being extended by a hand with a wedding band on it.

The wall of the cell had writing on it, obviously put there by the guard before the image had been drawn. "Hang in there, kiddo. There's more to life than meets the eye. – Cpl. Hansen."

The rest of the pages were filled with drawings of the prison. Buildings, yards, cells. There were few people in this one, just shadowy outlines and the occasional guard; it was the work of a man alone. There were warm, soft lights coming from housing unit windows, an overhead view of the prison showing the network of fences and yards and gates as a wash of abstract art, a corridor lined with cells that somehow managed to look beautiful, rather than desolate and cold.

Mal sighed, turning the pages and examining the drawings more closely. He recognized many of the places; the hospital, the glossy administration building, the yards, one of the buildings where he’d been taken many times for the initial, pointless interrogations. Potted plants.

The ubiquitous potted plants, yet another misguided notion of a terminally misguided government that thought a body could change the nature of a thing with rules and window dressing. That border planets could be made to resemble the Core with tariffs and laws and smiling politicians whose manners concealed the fact that the only thing that mattered was the money and connections they could make by squeezing the life blood from them who had precious little of it in the first place.

Som

Comments
Sunday, 04 May 2008 12:23
Cody needs help, but I think Mal is going to provide it. Yet another thing/person for him to look after so he doesn't have to think about his own predicament. Mal needs some light at the end of the tunnel. But excellent work.
Sunday, 04 May 2008 13:13
Very interesting. Is Cody an Alliance experiment like River, or is this how Mal decides to shelter River? Very interesting. Very interesting take on how Cody was mentally institutionalized, but Mal could never be.

Your characterizations always ring true. You always let your characters grow as human beings - no matter what. Looking forward to what's in store next!
Sunday, 04 May 2008 14:48
Excellent work! Cody does need help but I'm unsure if he's always been insane or it was brought on by the war. Like Jane, I think Mal's going to do something to help Cody.
Sunday, 04 May 2008 16:08
I'm torn on my feelings about Cody and mighty suspicious about what happened to him when those guards took him. Are they indoctrinating him to kill? Maybe to take Mal out one night and then claim plausible deniability because the young man is unstable? That's the sort of evil crazy *goushi* I would expect of the almighty not-so-shiny Alliance. If I were Mal and the others I would keep one eye on Cody at all times, just to be on the safe side. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 05 May 2008 23:33
I'm always happy to see a new chapter of this story posted, and this one was as very well-written, and engrossing as ever. Your writing and characterizations are a sheer pleasure to read.

However, this sounds like a major sub-plot taking shape here. I find myself anxious to get on with the main story--Mal, Wash, and Zoe getting through this post-war fix and on to their new lives--rather than tracking through an entirely new storyline. I am not, mind you, wanting to see this story end! I am just wanting to spend the time in the main theme and with the main characters at this point.

But, however you intend to go with this, and however long you want to take doing so, I'm on-board with you! Wonderful story.
Wednesday, 07 May 2008 10:49
i think i ran out of gushing comments a long way away - but i'll just say thaht te plots are getting me very intrigued! everything else, (like y'know the uh, words!)top notch as ever:)

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