Blue Sun Room FICTION - DRAMA

The Losing Side, Ch. 62 - Aiding the Enemy

Sunday, April 20, 2008

Mal saves the life of an Alliance guard, and starts having serious doubts about his own mental state.

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Author's note: Sorry about the long delay in posting. Things in my life have been a huge mess lately and still are...but consider this a small step towards getting back on track.

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Gruenberg and Thompson, the two friends from Cody’s drawing, were standing at the gate making ineffectual attempts to get through it. The guard on the other side of the fence was staggering, gripping his throat. "He's choking," yelled Gruenberg. The officer outside collapsed just as Mal reached the gate. "He wanted help, and-"

Mal cut him off and yelled at the guard. "The card! Throw me your access card!" It was Lang, the guard who’d spoken to him with kindness after the trial. Responding to Mal's words, he waved an arm at his belt and went limp, an expression of pleading terror still lingering on his face.

"Ta me da," muttered Mal, eying the gate. Fellow was worth saving, worth trying for, and here was him about to be caught standing over another dead rutting guard. 'Course, if he just stood there, they might see their way clear to blaming him for that too.

Mal tossed his jacket over the spiked top of the gate and motioned to Thompson and Gruenberg. "Help me over." Landing heavily on the other side, he grabbed Lang's communicator off his belt and tossed it over the gate. "Call for help."

He flipped the unconscious man over. His face was a purplish color. Ironical. A few carefully placed thrusts, and Lang started coughing weakly, but his breathing stopped as quickly as it began.

Mal looked on in distaste. He never enjoyed this, not with his own men, certainly not with a guy keeping him locked in a living death. You're tryin' to save an Alliance guard – why? A playful grin and a snowball lobbed questioningly in his direction, sincere concern for a hurt stranger, a voice of reason trying to protect him from Lambert's insanity – Mal started breathing for him, as determined as if it had been one of his own men. Hell, at the moment this boy was one of his own men,

Comments
Sunday, 20 April 2008 13:51
So glad to see more of this story. RL has been problematic for many people lately. Loved the insightfulness into Mal's state of mind throughout this piece, but I think you captured a very important essence of Mal. That no matter what was done to him, they couldn't destroy the fundamental core of decency in him. Something RL could really use more of right now.
Sunday, 20 April 2008 13:51
Jetflair, good to have you back! Excellent chapter by the way, you really have a grip on Mal's psyche.
Sunday, 20 April 2008 14:19
Hooray! I really thought we wouldn't be getting more of this story so hanging out the flags in celebration for another brilliant chapter. Loved this and for the temptation Mal has - just for a moment or two - to end the guard's life not save it. Glad he chose the right option but equally pleased that he wasn't set upon by Alliance bully boys for his good deed. Maybe things are finally going to start looking up for Mal? Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 20 April 2008 14:45
So happy to see a new chapter! And a fine one, at that. You have the flow and feeling down completely smoothly and believable. A nice, subtle look into Mal's head in that moment, too.

Hope your own life settles down in a good, stable way, too.
NBZ
Sunday, 20 April 2008 16:32
Welcome back.

Good to have you here.
Sunday, 20 April 2008 21:21
Yeah! You're back!
Another great chaper! I love the way you write Mal. This story is brillant & it's one of my favorites.
Hope to see you at the Emerald City Con!
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Monday, 21 April 2008 07:48
The way you write Mal all I want to do is give him a big hug. Can I? Please?
Monday, 21 April 2008 12:54
Your Mal prowess continues apace - i have been hanging on this for the longest time!:)

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