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The Losing Side, Chapter 60

Monday, January 28, 2008

Wash gets a job, and Mal perfects his Alliance-taunting skills while developing an unlikely fondness for getting shots. Oh, and there's an artist who's a mite off.

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"Get back in line, gorrammit!"

"And good morning to you too, sir," replied Mal, tired. The cold, gray morning was a poetical end to the stressful night; depressing and unpleasant. The marches to meals were tensely controlled, but a decent way to break up the day. Too bad the guards running this one thought they were controlling deadly criminals.

"What the hell do you think you're doing?" asked the guard as Mal made his way the the front of their small line.

"Leading my men, sir." The only way he could think to support the monumentally disheartened lot was to take advantage of the few familiar military rituals that could remind them of a strength they’d once had.

"What part of this don't you understand?" snapped the guard. "You exit and get scanned in alphabetical order, you march in alphabetical order. Got it?"

Mal blinked like an extremely stupid person and started counting names off on his fingers as he wandered up and down the line like a lost puppy, finally inserting himself between Cole and Gruenberg with a happy smile. The other prisoners tried to control their laughter as the aggravated guard grabbed Mal by the sleeve and towed him into place.

"Good boy," sneered the guard, patting him on the shoulder. Mal added him to his would-really-like-to-punch list, and they started the march, through the gates and joining the line of prisoners from the other nearby yards, past Daniels.

Daniels threw up his hand. "March, halt." He spoke to the guard. "I'd like Sergeants and officers to assume leadership of their groups whenever it’s practical." He glanced at Mal, giving him a pleasant nod. "Let's get Sergeant Reynolds to head the march."

Mal stepped out and assumed a position at the head of his line with a wink at the red-faced guard. The fact that Daniels couldn't have been aware of the earlier conflict made it all the sweeter.

They were halfway to the cafeteria when a bright red and black bird landed on a nearby fence, and Mal followed it with his eyes. A baton thumped

Comments
Monday, 28 January 2008 14:44
Excellent...though I am in mourning for Mal's wonderful head of hair!
Monday, 28 January 2008 20:43
I'm wondering if that nasty barber is Sweeney Todd. Hope Mal takes a care with that crazy *hundan*. Loved the glimpse of Wash leading a more kindly life though it hurts that Mal is still locked up and like to be for another ten years. I am going to be old and grey my own self before you give that poor man any kind of reprieve. You sure you ain't Alliance? Ali D
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 29 January 2008 03:42
Wonderful chapter. I guess the haircut was inspired both by Sweeney Todd and a certain actor in a buzz cut in a certain movie about WWII?

I liked the contrast between Wash's life and Mal's life now. I can't wait for more.
Tuesday, 29 January 2008 05:46
Yeah! So happy to see your new chapter! Love how Mal has a "Would like to Punch List"

Keep writing!
Tuesday, 29 January 2008 13:14
So glad to see more! Loved the admittance to Kelli that Mal didn't think he could make it. But that made it even more clear how he used his snarkiness and baiting as a coping mechanism against losing himself in this place. Loved the hints you gave about the artist's unusual talents, and wondering where you're going with that. Glad to see Wash happy and remorseful at the same time.
Tuesday, 29 January 2008 13:30
This is wonderful, but I can't help thinking there's more angst in the offing. And it would have to be something bad to make Mal the way he was before the series. In the Serenity pilot he'd lost everything on Hera, but here he seems to be more like the Mal from The Train Job to Objects in Space. Still, all the human touches, the descriptions of his fellow inmates and the guards ... just give him a light at the end of the tunnel soon, dong mah?
Thursday, 31 January 2008 21:19
Yay! New chapter! And enjoyable as usual! Thank you!

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