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The Losing Side, Chapter 61 - Juggling Frustrations

Monday, February 11, 2008

Mal keeps on finding new and disturbing facts about one of his fellow prisoners, and Wash learns to juggle (and smuggle) goslings.

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Mal was watching through the shatterproof window when Cody came back. Watching was the only way through unending boredom. Each other, the cortex, the guards, the weather. Mal was of the personal opinion he was watching himself go insane. Each moment, each day – they weren’t so bad, but when a body added them all up – that was a dreary sort of math.

Cody’s hands were cuffed, his head down, and he was pressed against the side of the guard escorting him. Almost looked like he was clinging to the guy for support, but he didn’t seem to be having any trouble walking. Mal glanced at the cortex screen. Five hours since they’d pulled him out of the yard.

The guard was unlocking the handcuffs and talking quietly to Cody. “Are you okay, son? Do you need to tell me something?”

“No!” said the young man sharply, still seeming reluctant to leave the guard’s side. He looked up when he heard Mal’s approach, then resumed studying the gravel. The guard pushed him through the opening in the gate with more concern than force, glancing at Mal.

Cody simply stood motionless, his head down, shaking slightly. His hair and shirt were wet, and he looked like he’d been crying. “Son?”

Cody jerked his head up. “It’s none of your business,” he said, his voice even and cold. Something in it made Mal – twitchy. Little things standing up on the back of his neck.

“Can I come in? Shi gao xing?” Mal stared. The man who spoke those words sounded like a gentle and very insecure boy, and Mal got the impression he actually thought Mal might deny the request.

“Be my guest,” he said, flummoxed. Once inside, Cody changed without a word to anyone and climbed into his bunk, pulled the covers over his head, and went to sleep.

~~~~~

“Mal?” He turned his head. Khiloh was at the gate, looking – small. He’d withdrawn after that evening at the hospital; Mal had misjudged just how easy the kindhearted guard was to hurt. He walked up to the gate. There was a very lonely man looking through the bars at him, and for a

Comments
Monday, 11 February 2008 23:08
Great chapter - very intriguing OC in Cody. Great to see Wash on the outside, and wondering what's going on inside Mal's head.

Come now and let us reason together. Though your sins are like scarlet, they shall be as white as snow. Wonderful quote. Something that could give so much comfort to Cody and his crime is in sharp contrast to Mal's attitude. Hope you find a middle ground for both. Looking forward to more soon!
Tuesday, 12 February 2008 01:18
I'm thinking that now Cody has told Mal his ownself what he did and what has happened to him afterwards it has cleared the air between them and while they might never be friends I don't think Mal will be beating on him again or letting anyone else do so. At least, that is my hope. As for Wash and the juggling geese that really is something you can only imagine anyone doing drunk. Ali D
Youcan't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 12 February 2008 05:44
Another fantastic chapter. I just want this to go on and on. You seem to inhabit Mal's brain.

And Wash juggling geese. Amdobell is right, you can only something you can do drunk.
Tuesday, 12 February 2008 12:47
huzzah! so glad you're back - and never a let down!:)
Thursday, 14 February 2008 00:19
I'm coming in late to the party, but this chapter was excellent!
Tuesday, 01 April 2008 01:38
sigh. I hate cliffhangers.

*starts shaking* must...wait...must...control...spasms. Wait for... # 62... *twitch*

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