Preparations for a dance – part two:
Radha Brook stood under the spray of the shower and wished the water were hotter.
Third shower today – hardly a conservative use of the recycled H2O… but the damn Detective had insulted her… deliberately, if her instincts were sharp. The man resented the waste of his time – so he stole some of mine. Not a Companion anymore. True. But – some of the rituals never… you get hardwired – to do… certain things. Leaning against the plexi of the unit she switched the faucet off and let her thoughts, her feelings, her morning and the memory of it, drain away.
For the briefest of moments as the droplets shook loose from her hair, from under her arms, the backs of her legs – for the briefest of moments she felt truly clean – and fresh – just an anonymous young girl – back in the Training House again.
Then the apartments external comm. buzzed and the day collapsed back onto her flesh. Exiting the shower she was unclothed but no longer naked. Distinctions, Companions learned all about them. Walking over the blow square – she picked up the phone with a warm dry hand.
“Radha here,” she said.
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Glad as she was to be rid of the meek looking Trainee who had shown her the way, Inara wished they were still walking the hard and shadowed corridors of the inner Temple.
After an unseemly length of time, the girl had escorted Inara to a gate, ( here I go down the oubliette – Inara had thought) fumbling with the keys before opening it.
So, waiting by the High Priestess’ office door was for what? Inara had wondered, to make me sweat? Keep me annoyed? I know why I’m here – and so does She… so why all this… whatever THIS would turn out to be.
Smiling at the Trainee who was pointing her through the gate, Inara ducked her head under the heavy stone of the frame – and entered the gardens beyond.
“Ah, there you are,” the Priestess had said from somewhere in front of her. “Don’t dawdle girl, I treasure the time I get in the garden –
Guess I better get another chapter cooking, huh? Can't let you have things all your own way in the BSR :)
I love the House Priestess and her long braided hair, very nice touch. And her ability to be as rude as she likes, wonderful.
I love your details. The garden, with all it's distractions, and the bright blinding sun was wonderful.
I am very intrigued to know just who this young novice is that Inara's brought with her, and likewise, who (and why) is the Abbot's aide on Serenity? All these inescapable connections, drawing them all together... delicious.
I also loved the moment with Radha in the shower, that fleeting feeling of clean and fresh before the reality of her day came crashing back down upon her.
Excellent. I am completely hooked, darlin'! Giddy with anticipation for where this all is going.
Would a Pride of Sheppards go against their...umm.. beliefs? I guess a Murder of Sheppards is out of the question?;)
Whoa!! Excellent story! I'll echo SpaceAnJL's comparison to Blade runner, but I aslo see Yip as a futuristic Columbo. Nicely Done!!
You can't take the sky from me
And the power shift for regulating or deregulating, in this case...interesting... and the Guild and Priory uniting to form a power base...interesting
And the missing Companions... that's scary
waiting on more
I have my own ideas as to Inara's novice and the Abbott's aide. Can't wait to see If I'm right.
-Companion Guild exploiting Nandi's death
-An alliance between the Book's denomination (or sect) and the Guild
-Priestess discussing the Alliance's use of the Guild as a control.
Your prose paints beautiful settings and vivid images of the characters involved.
The only critique I can offer is in the Burges/Alliance link. You refer to him as "their man." Some ellaboration might have been in order for that one because Burges seemed quited independent in the series.
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