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The Wages of Sihnon (pt2)

Friday, February 29, 2008

NEW PT.2: Having been summoned Inara is waiting to meet the Priestess of Sihnon. Meantime some Companions in Training have vanished from a shuttle whose pilot has amnesia. The Guild has apparently sent Radha Brook to investigate, removing the case from the hands of two private detectives... and those characters not already lying through their teeth are about to start.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4331    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Preparations for a dance – part two:

Radha Brook stood under the spray of the shower and wished the water were hotter.

Third shower today – hardly a conservative use of the recycled H2O… but the damn Detective had insulted her… deliberately, if her instincts were sharp. The man resented the waste of his time – so he stole some of mine. Not a Companion anymore. True. But – some of the rituals never… you get hardwired – to do… certain things. Leaning against the plexi of the unit she switched the faucet off and let her thoughts, her feelings, her morning and the memory of it, drain away.

For the briefest of moments as the droplets shook loose from her hair, from under her arms, the backs of her legs – for the briefest of moments she felt truly clean – and fresh – just an anonymous young girl – back in the Training House again.

Then the apartments external comm. buzzed and the day collapsed back onto her flesh. Exiting the shower she was unclothed but no longer naked. Distinctions, Companions learned all about them. Walking over the blow square – she picked up the phone with a warm dry hand.

“Radha here,” she said.

………………………………….

Glad as she was to be rid of the meek looking Trainee who had shown her the way, Inara wished they were still walking the hard and shadowed corridors of the inner Temple.

After an unseemly length of time, the girl had escorted Inara to a gate, ( here I go down the oubliette – Inara had thought) fumbling with the keys before opening it.

So, waiting by the High Priestess’ office door was for what? Inara had wondered, to make me sweat? Keep me annoyed? I know why I’m here – and so does She… so why all this… whatever THIS would turn out to be.

Smiling at the Trainee who was pointing her through the gate, Inara ducked her head under the heavy stone of the frame – and entered the gardens beyond.

“Ah, there you are,” the Priestess had said from somewhere in front of her. “Don’t dawdle girl, I treasure the time I get in the garden –

Comments
Friday, 29 February 2008 15:28
Yeah, this is fun. Shades of 'Blade Runner' and Frank Herbert. Always good. You ever read Richard Morgan? Or C J Cherryh? 'Cos the House Priestess reminds me of Ilisidi.

Guess I better get another chapter cooking, huh? Can't let you have things all your own way in the BSR :)
Friday, 29 February 2008 17:52
I'm enjoying this very much. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Friday, 29 February 2008 17:53
I enjoyed the two stories running alongside each other. I kind wish there's more description on Yip though. That part of the text sometimes feels like reading a story from a fast-moving train. Good, but I can't keep up!
2X2
Friday, 29 February 2008 18:00
Mmmmm, I am quite enjoying the flow of your words. They are lovely, and very gracefully draw me through the whole piece. Lovely.

I love the House Priestess and her long braided hair, very nice touch. And her ability to be as rude as she likes, wonderful.

I love your details. The garden, with all it's distractions, and the bright blinding sun was wonderful.

I am very intrigued to know just who this young novice is that Inara's brought with her, and likewise, who (and why) is the Abbot's aide on Serenity? All these inescapable connections, drawing them all together... delicious.

I also loved the moment with Radha in the shower, that fleeting feeling of clean and fresh before the reality of her day came crashing back down upon her.

Excellent. I am completely hooked, darlin'! Giddy with anticipation for where this all is going.
Friday, 29 February 2008 21:22
Bwahaha!! 'Flock of Sheppards'. Sounds like a modern take on a mediocre 80's band.

Would a Pride of Sheppards go against their...umm.. beliefs? I guess a Murder of Sheppards is out of the question?;)

Whoa!! Excellent story! I'll echo SpaceAnJL's comparison to Blade runner, but I aslo see Yip as a futuristic Columbo. Nicely Done!!
Friday, 29 February 2008 21:23
Sorry, trouble posting. Meant to add, check out Needy's fic's. He writes about the male side of Companion life excellently as well.
Friday, 29 February 2008 22:13
Intriguing. I'm wondering if we are going to find out that the Abbot's aide is actually Jayne. He was very close and respectful towards Shepherd Book and I can imagine his ma instilling a healthy respect for the cloth (and not just the orange one she knits for his head!) Can't wait to see what devious path you are taking us. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 01 March 2008 00:45
I've always thought Inara to be a tad bit naive and idealistic about the underside of the Guild and its practices. Her conversation with the House Mistress illustrates that well.

And the power shift for regulating or deregulating, in this case...interesting... and the Guild and Priory uniting to form a power base...interesting

And the missing Companions... that's scary

waiting on more
Saturday, 01 March 2008 03:58
Hmmmm. I really like this, the Spirtual and the Sexual working together for once.

I have my own ideas as to Inara's novice and the Abbott's aide. Can't wait to see If I'm right.
NBZ
Sunday, 02 March 2008 03:03
Enjoying this very much. :P
Tuesday, 03 June 2008 02:11
Some very interesting things here:
-Companion Guild exploiting Nandi's death
-An alliance between the Book's denomination (or sect) and the Guild
-Priestess discussing the Alliance's use of the Guild as a control.

Your prose paints beautiful settings and vivid images of the characters involved.

The only critique I can offer is in the Burges/Alliance link. You refer to him as "their man." Some ellaboration might have been in order for that one because Burges seemed quited independent in the series.

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