AMDOBELL

Tuesday, 31 August 2004 22:49

Adore this story to itty bitty pieces and I just love the notion of Inara taking care of Mal, making sure he gets the rest he so desperately needs though I suspect she may be quietly questioning him while he is damn near asleep to get at the nightmares he hides from her. Good myth! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me

JEBBYPAL

Wednesday, 01 September 2004 00:46

well, wash's world is officially rocked...bit surprised was mal the one to do it...payback for the sleeping pills i guess.

Great as usual....can't wait to see wash's reaction...and what did mal whisper to Inara???:P

MERRIE

Wednesday, 01 September 2004 04:15

Just when I think I can't possible adore this story any more, you go and write a chapter like this. I absolutely loved it!!! The delicious drama and angst, the interaction between Simon and Mal, the sublime Mal/Inara-ness, and the absolutely wonderful little psychological..."quirks" you keep giving Mal. Like the not liking to be bound. You seem to have put a lot of thought into how he should react after such an ordeal as the previous chapters, and your story is all the better for it. Again, keep up the great work, and I look forward to loving the story even more with the next chapter!

-Merrie

NEROLI

Wednesday, 01 September 2004 08:53

Wonderful chapter, nice to know Wash is getting some of his answers. Even if they are not what he wants to here and not from who he wants to hear them from.

And lovely Inara/Mal interaction at the end. A little hint that the wounds can be healed, perhaps?

SUVIE

Wednesday, 01 September 2004 17:07

glorious addition!

KISPEXI2

Thursday, 02 September 2004 14:15

Every time I get to the end of a chapter of this glorious fic, it seems too soon. I am utterly engrossed from the very first word to the last. The emotions hit just as hard as any Joss put me through and the delights are just as delightful.

Poor Wash and poor, poor Zoe. I've often wondered whether Mal's sexual reticence is a result of things that happened/that he witnessed in the war, so I'm very interested to see where you're going with this particular thread.

And the Inara scene was so gentle, cute and loving.

You are officially banned from ever finishing this story.