AMDOBELL

Monday, 03 January 2005 11:15

Absolutely adored this as I have been doing the entire series. Gorrammit, just wished you could write a whole lot faster! And is it just me or did Zoe going all Jayne at the end? "Treasure? Is there treasure?" Oh yeah, can't wait for more. You have all the characters spot-on and it is something to cherish. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me

POTEMKINVILLAGER

Monday, 03 January 2005 13:08

Damn straight there's a treasure: it's this story.

So very brave of you, Guildsister, preparing the BDMs to take on the 'verse.

Gush.

SOULOFSERENITY

Monday, 03 January 2005 16:42

Ooh, I think this story is about to rev back up into high gear! I love where you're taking all this, and I can;t wait to see exactly what kind of plan Book has up his sleeve.

- Soul -

ARTSHIPS

Monday, 03 January 2005 16:51

Especially liked Book's realizaiotn that he was replacing serenity with Serenity.

And please take Ali's advice - Write faster! Your stories - the little ones on top of the big one - are just so shiny.

CAPNERIC

Tuesday, 04 January 2005 11:47

Well, gorram it, never been too interested in fanfic before I discover these two books on the site, I've now had no sleep and been late to work and my wife's pissed off at me 'cause I read this all night long.

It's almost as bad as viewing the DVD and reaching the end except I have the consolation of knowing there'll be more.

Thanks!

CASTIRONJACK

Wednesday, 05 January 2005 12:25

As much as everyone would like you to write faster, I can afford to wait, especially for stuff like this.

Keep it like simmering homemade stew, not like Ramen in the microwave...

'Nother great installment...

Keep flyin'

GUILDSISTER

Wednesday, 05 January 2005 17:25

Thanks for all the shiny comments, folks! And for stringing along with me on this not-so-little-anymore writing excursion. I actually write pretty fast--I just don't have a lot of time to spend on it. Darned life-stuff getting in the way. ;-) Of course, chapters about teenagers screwing around do write quicker than the recent heavy-themed ones...

KISPEXI2

Wednesday, 05 January 2005 19:14

Brilliant, as usual. Very nice tweaking of the original episode to suit your story. Am left feeling a little iffy about Book ... but still very much intrigued by him.

Adorable flashback to young Mal and Zoe - and more than a little poignant again. And the irony of Zoe being unconvinced he really wanted to spend all eternity with her. Nice.

Sweet take on Inara too. Nice to see her portrayed so sympathetically.

But what I liked best about this chapter was the Mal/Simon interaction. Very funny. Very believable.

As was the idea Zoe would shoot two preachers and a doctor.

Great stuff. Well worth the wait!

ANONYMOUS

Monday, 17 January 2005 10:10

Holy crap youre good.

ANONYMOUS

Wednesday, 23 March 2005 08:06

MORE MORE MORE!!!!