RELFEXIVE

Monday, 29 November 2004 00:37

Ahhh... shiny

Can't wait for the next one... hope it's not so long a wait!

AMDOBELL

Monday, 29 November 2004 00:42

I absolutely adore this series and the way you write Mal just makes me want to up and hug him. *Xie xie ni*, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me

JEBBYPAL

Monday, 29 November 2004 00:45

Mal’s face radiated blank innocence. “‘Cause we’ll sure as certain stop on by the preacher’s and get properly hitched before we introduce this predicament to my momma,” Mal said.

“What?!” Zoe squawked.
OMG, that was the best line ever!!!!!

And I'm w/ Mal, River isn't make alot of sense but I can't wait till it does!

POTEMKINVILLAGER

Monday, 29 November 2004 01:42

Gush!

I'm going to have to sparingly mete out the superlatives, on account of there's so much here to enjoy, and, it seems, so much more to come.

Hope you're not seeking (more) incisive commentary. That would be a kick in the butt to the lazy lurker feasting on your tasty stories.

Mixed metaphorically,
PV

KISPEXI2

Monday, 29 November 2004 10:27

As usual, totally gobsmacked by the tightness and poetry of your writing. So much detail in so few words.

Loved the opening section - the way you set a concrete scene that had all those layers of history in it too. Particularly liked the image of Mal "his stance shouted his resistance to whatever charms this world might hold".

And the twig/gun thing was all manner of creepifying - and utterly right. As was Mal's "I think it's a stick." Funny.

Lots of funny. Jayne and Simon. "Asshole" (*g*!!) Pregnant Zoe. Adored "lookin’ for all the world like he’d just been shot betwixt the eyes and just hadn’t yet had the good sense to drop down dead to the ground".

All intertwined with the chilling "when he looked into Zoe’s eyes and saw, clear as could be, she didn’t believe him" and foreboding "“Time to conquer the ‘verse.”

Mal scowled and continued on toward his meeting with Shepherd Book. He didn’t know what that gal meant, but something about it was all manner of disturbing."

Shiny, so very shiny!

CASTIRONJACK

Wednesday, 01 December 2004 11:53

Don't think I'm not taking notes there, Guildsister. I've really been impressed by your insight into Book, and now it's his turn to shine, as all the characters have had in your series, and I can't wait to see what you're going to do with him. Book is the one character that I absolutely dread writing for because there was so little to go on from the series.

Good job,

And keep flyin'

ANONYMOUS

Monday, 06 December 2004 17:02

just plain great.

ANONYMOUS

Monday, 20 December 2004 04:29

I know I just lurk, and don't review nearly enough to be allowed to give you orders, but pleaseeeee - Update! I'd been nearly a month. I'm dyin' here.

ANONYMOUS

Thursday, 27 October 2005 15:12

他妈的 =
懂吗? =
狗屎 =


WHY !!!! the story is great just your
little squares drove me up the wall
must have taken you a decade just to work out the gorram key
next story just type it in there