HOTPOINT

Monday, 20 December 2004 22:07

The Templars? Guess they traded up from swords over the centuries :-)

Nice... very nice

RELFEXIVE

Monday, 20 December 2004 22:38

Jeepers!

JEBBYPAL

Monday, 20 December 2004 22:58

wow!!!!! Such a great holiday present to see another chapter.

:)

AMDOBELL

Monday, 20 December 2004 23:37

Absolutely fabulous! I loved the way you put this whole story together and the revelations about Book are just stunningly brought into the open. I do feel sorry for Mal though with all the tinkering the Alliance have done to his brain, River's too. Kudos, cannot wait for the next part! Very shiny Christmas gift, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me

KISPEXI2

Tuesday, 21 December 2004 13:49

Oh my ...

So much going on here I don't know where to start! Utterly convinced by the personal and psychological revelations and head-spinning with the science. What you're doing with Book - AMAZING! And totally believable.

Mal and River and the time-jumping - an excellent premise, well-played.

And I loved the prickliness between Mal and Simon. It added a bit of humour, but also an undercurrent of even more darkness when it related back to River.

And I liked "Though Book led the way, the captain had an interesting way of not quite following." Ain't that the truth?!

The wait for this chapter was well worth it!

SOULOFSERENITY

Tuesday, 21 December 2004 17:49

This story is just so good. Everything about the drug that was used on Mal and how it relates to River, and Book's secret, and the Knights Templar...

I can't wait for more!!

ARTSHIPS

Tuesday, 21 December 2004 20:27

Get the feeling we're close to crossing over the line into surreal. But that's what "whole world turned on its ear" feels like. Good story. Don't stop!

CASTIRONJACK

Friday, 31 December 2004 11:04

What is Book so afraid of?

Is he afraid of actually breaking the captain or of failing him?

Or of revealing himself completely...

(Which, of course, he hasn't quite...)

It's a very patient and ingenious way of exposing the characters to what Blue Sun may or may not be. Slipping us into the conspiracy one step at a time so that not only we believe it, but so that the characters start to come around too.

Now will the news need to be recieved by the rest of the crew or will Simon, Mal, and Book keep their little discoveries to themselves?

The best answers lead to the most infuriating questions, don't they?

Keep flyin'