Blue Sun Room FICTION - SUSPENSE

LockJaw complete version

Thursday, December 13, 2007

the full version of the interrupted fic.

post BDM the Serenity crew are trapped on Mr Universe's moon, having dealt with a boy Reaver and a young Hunter - they now face the Mooon itself...

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"No dirge shall I upraise,/ But waft the angel on her flight with a pæan of old days!"

Lenore – Edgar Allan Poe.

Chapter one: Darkness at the break of noon.

Under the lightning the wounded world below seemed to huddle in on itself. The damaged buildings, the broken metal spaceships and the corpses strewn among them seemed to shudder together. The angered roiling clouds were shaped demonic and they poured down darkness like a curse. Day blasted back into night.

There had been a war here and what was left was simply storm and injury.

The dry and acrid wind chased across the surface of what had been secret but now lay opened and betrayed. Steel fell from the sky and buried itself in the ground hot and hissing - or else smashed into its likeness with a tortuous concussion.

There had been a war here and what was left was death and wreckage.

…………………………………………

Hunter in the darkness – stealthy and soundless - Hunter in the light – swift and contained.

Sniffing the artificial recycled air of the interior – savouring the scent of blood and skin, the salty tang of fear and violence, animal odours… easy to track, easy to hunt, easy to kill… and the hunter is a killer, moving off real easy now, with a shrug, like a bird into flight.

…………………………………………

Voices –

They will float through a dark place like dust on a hot night – they will catch the ear, play itchy on the mind - and the corridors of Serenity were so very, very dark.

“I don’t murder children.”

“I do.”

Zoe Alleyne heard the voices as she moved through the blackness, as she patrolled. It was typical of Malcolm Reynolds – she thought – not the obsessive playing and replaying of the Operative’s murderous statement… but the just the plain fact that he was doing it here – in the darkened interior of Serenity.

The rest of the crew had at least attempted to make something of their stay in this place, on this moon – to make a show of trying out new, bigger, brighter, more private quarters - but not

Comments
Thursday, 13 December 2007 13:31
Heey!!

Glad to see you in the BSR again =)

"Simon Tam – are you aiming to misbehave?"

"Well I, uh, - I guess I am."

I never thpught I'd see the day when Simon Tam aims to misbehaved after he put a thorn on the alliance flesh once and got in so much trouble because of it :) But I guess for River... he would die in a heartbeat ;)luv this one a lot!

Keep flying ;)
Thursday, 13 December 2007 14:19
Welcome back Wytchy. Thanks for wrapping this up. I enjoyed it.
Thursday, 13 December 2007 23:07
Very nice wrapup to a nail biting story:)
Saturday, 15 December 2007 03:41
"Of course a small voice did make a mental note to try and remember to thank Kaylee for clearing a way – and Jayne for knowing it - but it was a small voice not often listened to."
- So true!

It is of interest to me how, of all the crew, Kaylee gets left outside in the (rapidly increasing) cold, while the others make it to the ship. It doesn't seem to have had much of an effect on her, but I imagine that's because she's still numb after nearly being eaten by Reavers that a little asphyxiation (or freezing, according to River) doesn't seem like that big of a deal. That just shows how strong her character really can be, and when push comes to shove, she's ready to die for her crewmates.

Another wonderful fic, and my thanks for ending it properly.

Stay shiny,
~MG

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