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Last Stand

Tuesday, November 13, 2007

Mal faces his Alamo and rallies the troops going into the last week of the battle of Serenity Valley. Short standalone story.

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“What valley was that? The one you couldn’t drive us out of? The one we held for a good two weeks after the war?”

“We beat you, that’s what history’ll remember,” said the disgruntled official.

“No, I imagine history’ll remember a squad that held a valley until they was ordered to lay down arms. Maybe even recall it as your biggest defeat,” responded Mal, his voice even.

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Rain was falling, running into his eyes, washing sweat and dirt out of his hair and down his face. It was mud he knelt in, mud that served as a bed and quite possibly the final resting place of one very defiant purplebelly. The soldier's eyes were sleepy with morphine, but it didn't dull his anger. “You ever heard of winning the battle and losing the war, Sergeant? We’re gonna mow you down like – “ he started coughing, grimacing in pain, throwing up blood. The medic gave Mal a warning look.

“Recall hearin’ that more’n a week ago,” said Mal. “Seems to me we’re still here.”

“Not for long. You’ve lost. You must wanna be a hero real bad to die here too.”

“That wouldn’t be the plan,” said Mal, standing.

~~~~~

Mal scanned the weary group of men, the scattering of women. All slumped on the ground, all looking to him. It was the closest he was going to get to a formation; only a brute would ask these men to stand now. They still held the valley, but their grip was slipping. It was easy for men to be heroes when they were fresh and pumped full of adrenaline. Another matter entirely when they were surrounded by an enemy that never stopped coming, one that that threw new troops their way as fast as they could kill them. When they'd give it all up just for a good night's sleep, when the ache of fatique and wounds and the faces of dead friends just couldn't be set aside.

You’ve lost. Not yet, not until we give up.

“Been told we’re going to loose. Some tell me you’re afraid to die for nothing.” He paused, looked down. “Haven’t lost until we surrender. And - seems poor form to surrender when you

Comments
Tuesday, 13 November 2007 16:29
A goodly comment on the end of the war but where was Zoe? Seemed all manner of wrong for Mal to be addressing the last of their troops in the Valley with no Zoe beside or in front of him. I liked his speech too. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 13 November 2007 19:34
I loved this the first time I read it. Still love it -- particularly this line:

He turned and looked out over the valley. Graceful sort of place. Pretty, if you were feeling generous enough to overlook the scorched earth and the dead folk lying all about. Not so bad for a final resting place.
Tuesday, 13 November 2007 23:19
Iv'ebeen working on a Mal war story for a while. If it turns out half as good as this I'll be happy. Great work
Wednesday, 14 November 2007 03:22
Loved this when I first read it and I love it still.

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