JEBBYPAL

Saturday, 21 August 2004 03:01

“I had me a Companion,” he said, giving Mal a comradely smack on the arm.

LOL! So Jayne! So very Jayne. Love the way this all played out and loved how it reflected the beginning of this series. Will be interesting to see how you have the wash/mal/zoe triangle play out.

“Suoshee. 琐细. You named my ship ‘Petty’?”

LOL! Almost as many great one liners in this story as in Joss's! Can't wait for more

ANONYMOUS

Saturday, 21 August 2004 04:55

What better time for Jayne to chime in than at the end? Act like a moron, pretty much be a moron and yet in the end still bring it all into perspective..... Much as everyone likes to make fun of him i want to point out that its good to be Jayne at times!

ANONYMOUS

Saturday, 21 August 2004 05:10

amazing. thank you guildsister.

MERRIE

Saturday, 21 August 2004 07:28

*speachless*

.....

Wow. That was...wow. An absolutely excellent chapter. The dynamic between Mal, Zoe and Wash is coming to a boil, and I'm not sure if I want to see it blow or not, but I do know that I'll enjoy/hate/love/curse whatever happens. And Jayne! What to say about our dear lovable merc? You write him beautifully. And the notion that he seems to understand Mal better than most of the crew-save Zoe, of course-is enthralling. Keep up the great work!!!!!!

-Merrie

AMDOBELL

Saturday, 21 August 2004 12:52

I absolutely adored the fact that it was Jayne that hit the nail on the head about Mal and told one and all in no uncertain terms why the Captain was so rutting crazy and incidentally putting Wash in his place without getting in his face and nasty about it. Very well done and can't wait to see how the dust settles in the Here-After. Excellent story all the way through and always begging for more, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me

RELFEXIVE

Saturday, 21 August 2004 22:44

Wow...

More more more!

ANONYMOUS

Monday, 23 August 2004 16:39

Amazing

KISPEXI2

Wednesday, 25 August 2004 08:38

Now I want to cry. With joy, with admiration ... and a little with envy. Damn it but that was good. I love the little asides that root this tale well and truly in the FlyVerse. And the carefree way you use them, making no big thing of it. "Three and three". Wow!

Funny, moving, and even uplifting this time. What about that Jayne? Marvellous.
" Half the outlaws roaming the ‘verse are their kind and every damned one of ‘em is squirrelly one way or another." Pitch perfect.

*genuflects*

LANDRY

Thursday, 26 August 2004 19:30

You manage to keep me reading and checking all the time to see if you've posted the next installment. Well done.

CASTIRONJACK

Friday, 27 August 2004 07:24

Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant. I said something around Blue Sun 2 similar, but I absolutely mean it. Everyone had their moment, even as it was focused on Mal and Zoe. A true ensemble effort.

/bow

Keep flyin'

CAPNERIC

Tuesday, 04 January 2005 02:15

I've spent the past 4 hours reading it all to this point. It's all fantastic and that's the worst I can say.

My only critique is above where Jayne names River and Simon. He never says their name in the show. He only calls Simon "Doc" and only ever addresses River as "you". 'Course, this could be a turning point in their relations....