AMDOBELL

Wednesday, 18 August 2004 23:26

Oh Wow, this is such a fantastically rich tale you are writing and I just love the Mal and Zoe parts with the Preacher's comments making me chuckle so much too - gorrammit, what *did* he do before he became a Shepherd? Good bible! As for Wash, he really needs Zoe to sit him down and tell him every gorram thing from the first itty bitty speck of dust formed in the cosmos to the great big scarey Here and Now. Best he wraps his head around how lucky he is before Zoe loses patience with him. That Green Eyed Monkey on his back has got to go! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me

JEBBYPAL

Thursday, 19 August 2004 01:29

*jumps up and down while clapping* 3 whole shiny updates this week:) Love it when my favorite authors coincide w/ my most stressful weeks:) Very shiny, so glad everyone made it out more or less okay....course, makes me eager to reread all the tension too. Ya had me worried for a bit that you were gonna let cappy go to jail again.

Now then, why doesn't zoe want him to listen to that yet...think i remember harken saying something mighty telling at one point.

MERRIE

Thursday, 19 August 2004 07:09

Oh my goodness gracious. You continue to amaze, astonish, and otherwise astound me with the unbelievable quality of your chapters. This one heck of a chapter! I was utterly enraptured with every word. Mal and Book, Wash, Zoe and Mal, Mal and Zoe... dear me, each scene was just as good-if not better-as the last. I can only say, BRAVO!!!

LORDGECKO

Thursday, 19 August 2004 13:11

This was undoubtedly my favorite chapter yet. But now Mal is thinking that they all need to start listening to River? Talk about a bizare twist. I need more. Please

ARTSHIPS

Thursday, 19 August 2004 15:16

Loved all of it, but especially when Zoe was relating her take on Harken's motivations. Can't wait to see how Mal takes to the new owner.

DELTOS

Thursday, 19 August 2004 20:44

Excellent series...looking forward to reading more.

LANDRY

Friday, 20 August 2004 16:02

Very well written. So much depth of feeling. As my 14-year-old cousin might say, "You're rocking the suburbs."

KISPEXI2

Wednesday, 25 August 2004 08:15

Bliss. Perfect. Divine.

"You bring out the devil ... Yeah, it's a gift of mine." So on the button, it's edible.

"I want to confess, I'll go talk to the Preacher" "Well he is primed for it, let me tell you." Hee!

And kamikaze Wash! Utterly true to the character.

And then that lovely scene between Mal and Zoe that hints at so much, shot through with so much love it made me tingle. Beautiful.

Nice way to sing the victory song. So, where do we go from here?