Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL
Blue Sun Job, Part 22: X1823
Tuesday, August 17, 2004
And all have returned to their places in Serenity and all is well... sure.
CATEGORY: FICTION TIMES READ: 4484 RATING: 9.0 (PG13) SERIES: FIREFLY
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Wednesday, 18 August 2004 00:14
"Monty had a nephew? Monty had a nephew who was an Alliance officer? Monty had a nephew who was an Alliance officer helping them escape??"
“You’re pretty damned good at picking locks. You learn that at whore academy?”
“Jayne!” Simon and Book exclaimed in unison in shocked, admonishing tones.
Jayne shrugged. “What? Cap’n’s out cold--someone had to say it.”
These are absolute GEMS!! My hat's off to you...brilliant!
“You’re pretty damned good at picking locks. You learn that at whore academy?”
“Jayne!” Simon and Book exclaimed in unison in shocked, admonishing tones.
Jayne shrugged. “What? Cap’n’s out cold--someone had to say it.”
These are absolute GEMS!! My hat's off to you...brilliant!
Wednesday, 18 August 2004 00:42
Loved this to pieces, so many good bits in it and I just can't wait for the next part but don't want the gorram story to end, *dong ma*? What creepified me most was Book laughing at the Captain. Even though we only got a bit of River in this part she was excellent and that whole Blue Sun thing was pretty chilling. Wonder what wacky fun Wash will have with a giggling Zoe? *Xie xie ni*, so shiny I need sunglasses to read this. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 18 August 2004 02:18
Da da da dum... love the way you build it all up. Absolutely masterful. Lots more fallout to deal w/ from this chapter....and wonder what jayne will think of simon taking river off her meds??
Wednesday, 18 August 2004 11:55
" He’d deal with that disturbing thought later" fnerg!!
"Jayne shrugged. “What? Cap’n’s out cold--someone had to say it.”" I think this may become my favourite fanfic line ever!
Oh and I really like the way Wash does his duty voluntarily when Mal's not there to order him around and make him obstinate. Nice insight.
Adore the way the code played out. "Right down to the denomination" .. hee!
Interesting what you had to say about the double negatives - a friend and I have been thinking about that. Sure it has more to it than just being uneducated-cowboy-speak.
Another yummy chapter. What job do you do BTW? Cos I think you've found your vocation here.
"Jayne shrugged. “What? Cap’n’s out cold--someone had to say it.”" I think this may become my favourite fanfic line ever!
Oh and I really like the way Wash does his duty voluntarily when Mal's not there to order him around and make him obstinate. Nice insight.
Adore the way the code played out. "Right down to the denomination" .. hee!
Interesting what you had to say about the double negatives - a friend and I have been thinking about that. Sure it has more to it than just being uneducated-cowboy-speak.
Another yummy chapter. What job do you do BTW? Cos I think you've found your vocation here.
Wednesday, 18 August 2004 14:25
Aaall good 
Jayne shrugged. “What? Cap’n’s out cold--someone had to say it.”
Work. Of. Genius.
Jayne shrugged. “What? Cap’n’s out cold--someone had to say it.”
Work. Of. Genius.
Thursday, 19 August 2004 12:39
Evil. The purest shiny evil. I'm so lovin' it, and I know that the end is near, but in a way, I don't want it to end. Your complexities and humor have me hooked. Promise me that you'll right more when you finish with this story.
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