AMDOBELL

Tuesday, 10 August 2004 23:14

Very very shiny and so much wishing you could write faster! Love this fic, poor Mal and Zoe - just hold on gorrammit! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me

JEBBYPAL

Wednesday, 11 August 2004 00:06

Ahh guildsister, we trust you:) We know that you'll take us for an amazing ride before giving us a joss-like ending! You've done incredibly well so far and have thoroughly enjoyed all your techniques. Each chapter is a very bright spot in my week.

Loved river flying the ship by the way!

ARTSHIPS

Wednesday, 11 August 2004 17:53

Don't stop now - Or even slow down.

KISPEXI2

Friday, 13 August 2004 15:02

OK, so this line "“Maybe I need to know you’ll still be there.”" just about cut my heart out.

Beautifully written, as always. River perfectly spooky and playful. Inara spot-on controlled and inventive. Great, great, great.


BTW I found your writer's explanation interesting - mainly because I agree with you*g* It's kind of the way I'm going myself, even though it might not seem that way, what with torture, death and Reavers ;). I like the way you let the characters take over because characters are the heart of Firefly. IMnsHO.

LORDGECKO

Thursday, 19 August 2004 11:42

Ok...I believed that you were going somewhere w/ this; now I know you are. Way shiny. Keep it coming

HEB

Sunday, 17 October 2004 23:32

That Zoe, Mal goodbye type scene was so powerful. I was seriously getting teary eyed. This is just amazing and I'm absolutely loving catching up on it.

Thanks

heb

Ps. I liked the use of the Buffy/Angel scene in the last chapter