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Blue Sun Job, Part 19: The Bottom
Friday, August 6, 2004
Bleak. Bleak, bleak, bleak... but the story's not near over.
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Blue Sun Job, Part 19: The Bottom
Sequel to the
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Saturday, 07 August 2004 00:23
Gorrammit, I am *so* in tears. Poor Mal and still trying so hard to save Zoe at the end whatever it costs him yet Harkan not even giving him that. I sure hope our newly forming Big Damn Heroes (Simon, River and Inara) can come up with a way to get them out of this kangeroo court. Very shiny story, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 07 August 2004 02:19
You are so cruel....leaving us w/ the mother of all cliffhangers. Is there any chance that zoe and mal will actually get to talk alone let alone to the crew??
Guildsister, we seriously need to get some fluff for you to read...maybe then our Cappy won't be hurt so much.
Guildsister, we seriously need to get some fluff for you to read...maybe then our Cappy won't be hurt so much.
Saturday, 07 August 2004 05:46
Ah, Jebbypal, you're funny! This *is* the fluff. A freebie fanfic that's turned into a whole gorram novel--all for no pay with characters I don't even own... It beter be fluff! I must be crazy--embrace the crazy. Crazy is a valid lifestyle choice... (didn't I have Wash saying that in one part?)
Didn't really think this one was particularly a cliffhanger chapter. Hmmm... Kinda important for the characters to hit rock bottom (and play out my recurring cliff/edge/falling metaphor) before we can reenact the other recurring metaphor of climbing out of the grave back into life.
Thanks so much for your comments--all of you who leave them, Ali, Kispexi2, everyone--this is my first fanfic experience and I'm really enjoying the immediate feedback and comments.
Didn't really think this one was particularly a cliffhanger chapter. Hmmm... Kinda important for the characters to hit rock bottom (and play out my recurring cliff/edge/falling metaphor) before we can reenact the other recurring metaphor of climbing out of the grave back into life.
Thanks so much for your comments--all of you who leave them, Ali, Kispexi2, everyone--this is my first fanfic experience and I'm really enjoying the immediate feedback and comments.
Sunday, 08 August 2004 19:59
Ok, Guildsister. I surrender. You win. Where are you going with this? I have been trying to anticipate (with no luck) what you have in store for my favorite BDH's. And what's worse...you keep leaving us w/ these torturous endings that just beg for more. QUESTIONS!!! TOO MANY QUESTIONS!!! Who bought Serenity? Where is Jayne and all the money? What do Inara and the twins think they can do against an Alliance cruiser? Please hurry and write more! Way, way shiny
Friday, 13 August 2004 11:54
Pyschologically profound. Emotionally excruciating. Intricately, enticingly plotted.
You really make these characters live. Thankyou.
You really make these characters live. Thankyou.
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