JEBBYPAL

Monday, 02 August 2004 10:43

OMG!!!!!!! Can I say this without seeming crazy .... I love you...well your writing, same difference right ?LOL. Great great great chapter...just when I think it can't get any better. Poor zoe....hopefully this stays Harken and Mal's little secret. Gorramit, Book, Jayne and Inara better hurry up...or to hell w/ it..River, let lose your mojo and get our peeps outta there!

ANONYMOUS

Monday, 02 August 2004 13:00

Whew. Fairly breathless by the end of this one. Poor Mal - although I can't help but think that facing this particular demon (Serenity, not Harken) will be good for him in the long run. Loved the ref to "War Stories." And this thing with Zoe ... I sense tribulation. Keep it coming, Guildsister! HurrySundown

AMDOBELL

Monday, 02 August 2004 17:04

Wow! Powerful writing, had me in gorram tears with everything that *tamade hundan* put Mal through. Just not right. And that bit at the end, the gut punch about being preganant. Whoops, we talkin' Zoe here? Excellent writing if painful reading at times, I hope Mal gets some help soon. That twinkle in Book's eye is nothing but a sadistic twitch if he doesn't do something pretty soon. Ali D :~)
Think I'm gonna go pray for my Captain

ARTSHIPS

Monday, 02 August 2004 17:33

Just goes from bad to worse - For our heroes, that is, not the writing! Hope Zoe Junior survives the visit with Harken.

ANONYMOUS

Tuesday, 03 August 2004 03:05

This is just a spectacular series - you know your characters inside and out! An absolute pleasure to read - Sweens

CAT85

Tuesday, 03 August 2004 20:55

Amazing...love your work. Keep it comin'

ANONYMOUS

Thursday, 05 August 2004 17:38

Over the course of the past two days, I have now read all 18 installments of Blue Sun Job, and it rocks my socks off. Kudos on the authenticity of the dialogue and the believability and genuine-ness of the events.

KISPEXI2

Friday, 13 August 2004 10:42

Yikes! So good, so very good. I just want to roll around in this for days.

Been away, have masses of work, reading and writing to catch up on - but golly, this is right up there in my priorities.

I adore the relationship between Mal and Zoe in this story. There's something so poignant about the careless innocence of the 'good, enthusiastic screwing' back when they were 'just dumb kids' contrasted with the present. And now Zoe's pregnant ... how unsmooth is that?

I'm curious about how you reconcile the fact that Zoe so obviously has - frequently and enthusiastically! *g* - slept with Mal with Wash's "War Stories" conviction that they never had an intimate relationship? However you play it, I know I'll believe it because you write So.Damn.Pretty!