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A Mighty Thorn In a Mighty Paw - Ch. 56

Monday, February 19, 2007

A father's parting gift...

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3067    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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INT. PALADIN – BRIDGE

Madsen steps up to a console along the port wall, keeping his pistol trained on Gibson.

MADSEN: And now, for our next trick...

Madsen reaches under the console and presses a hidden button. A section of floor slides open in front of the center viewscreen. Angle view down to see the open cockpits of three small escape pods nestled snugly in their compartments.

MADSEN: The disappearing act. Sifu, don’t let him touch anything, please.

Madsen prods the two remaining techs from their chairs and herds them to the rear wall.

GIBSON (disdain): Time to tuck tail and run. Real heroes.

MADSEN (withdrawing zip ties from his belt): To some, yes.

Paul steps in front of his father, meeting his fiery stare.

PAUL (quietly): Would you have me shot out of the sky, sir?

GIBSON: Without a moment’s hesitation. You’ve proven a calamitous diappointment.

PAUL: As a weapon, or as a son?

GIBSON (tears welling, mouth twitching): Flip a coin.

Paul hauls back and punches his father clean across the jaw. The man sprawls on the deck, dazed.

Paul stands over him a beat, his expression dark.

PAUL: Please, father, take your very best shot. It’s the least you can do.

Paul turns on his heel and strides toward the front of the Bridge.

Paul, Madsen, and Powell slip down into the escape pods, the doors sliding shut behind them.

EXT. PALADIN – TOPSIDE

Angle view up to command tower to see three ports slide open. Three sleek escape pods burst forth, wings swinging out from their undersides and snapping into place.

INT. ESCAPE POD

Paul lies back in the half-reclining seat, his hand on the control stick between his knees, eyes on the screen before him.

MADSEN (VO Radio): I’ll take the lead. You two stay on my wing, no matter what.

POWELL (VO Radio): Copy.

PAUL: Copy.

INT. PALADIN – BRIDGE

Captain Gibson has picked himself up off the floor. He glances at his two techs, who are tied up against the back wall. He stumbles to a

Comments
Monday, 19 February 2007 10:52
Wow, this is brilliant story telling. I really hate Gibson, so disappointed Paul didn't end that *tamade hundan* but then it is his father after all. I have a sickening fear that with Gibson listening in on Paul's last tranmission to Serenity he is biding his time for Serenity to show herself in the rescue so he can nab them after all. Hope our BDHs don't get caught and scoop Paul up in the process! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 19 February 2007 15:17
That was sweet! Those Alliance escape pods sure are high tech. They probably have some countermeasures to mess with ships'(read: the Paladin's) tracking systems so they can make it to the ground safely, even in the middle of a battle (read:BDEscape). Otherwise they probably would have been blown out of the air. And it's just like the Alliance to have guns that are too big for swatting flies- they go for raw power.

I really hope River can engineer a BDMR (Midair Rescue) or else Paul is going to get a little thinner on impact. And will our heroes pick up Madsen and Powell as well, or will they opt to go their own way?

Thanks for another great chapter, HeWhoKicksAlot!

-MG
Monday, 19 February 2007 18:36
Ah, nice action. I can see them hurtling through the black. Poor Paul, he's started to grow on me, hope the crew can help him. Not a pretty sight, tho, him not able to control his landing... really nice description of his eject.
Wednesday, 21 February 2007 05:02
Oh crap! That ain't good...not good at all:(

Still...it's time for a River Tam Barn Swallow! What's that, you say? Why, it's a mid-air catch of a single human body travelling at speeds near terminal velocity if not actually terminal velocity itself!

;D

BEB
Wednesday, 21 February 2007 14:16
Ha ha haaaaghh!

Mine is an evil laugh!


Rob O.
Thursday, 22 February 2007 23:16
Been collectin' the pieces of yer puzzle and reading them when I can -- haven't caught up to the action so far, but to quote our facorite captain: "Damn Tasty!" You certainly have the plotting, pacing and dialog thang DOWN. Like watching a mini-series event of our BDHs. If the BDS was back on the air and I was in the hiring dept. for story writers, you, sir, would have a J-O-B in the 'Verse! Keep up the great words.

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