CAPTINAMAZING

Saturday, 17 July 2004 01:28

Mal just isint well stocked in luck is he? Ah well, if he was we would know so little i suppose

CAT85

Saturday, 17 July 2004 02:05

It just keeps getting better and better! Great Work.

ARTSHIPS

Saturday, 17 July 2004 12:43

Excellent story still, but the chapters are all too brief!

RELFEXIVE

Saturday, 17 July 2004 14:17

Oich! Good stuff!

KISPEXI2

Saturday, 17 July 2004 14:50

That was *so* Jayne. First sentence had me smiling. Then his wanting to make off with the money, his fear of being spaced ... excellent. True to character.

As for the interrogation - that Harken's a cunning hun dan! Fascinated to know what he's up to. And dreading what he's going to do to Zoe and Wash's marriage. Hopefully Zoe will slit the weasel's throat!

AMDOBELL

Saturday, 17 July 2004 19:41

This was rutting excellent! I hope our Captain can hold out until the cavalry, or whoever can come to rescue him, gets there. I am really intrigued as to just what it is that slimey *tamade hundan* Harkan is after. Seems saving a man's life don't count for much his end of the gutter. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me

STLOUISPHILE

Monday, 19 July 2004 13:25

Guildsister,

Your writing rocks! I've read a lot of ff in my time and your work stands with the best of the best!

Can't wait for the next installment!

stlouisphile

JEBBYPAL

Wednesday, 21 July 2004 23:51

Sorry I haven't been commenting, but lost my net connection recently. Loved this part! Jayne's conflict was well done. I think i was just as surprised as he was that he got to keep the money. Great writing and characters as always. Look forward to cutting and pasting the next update for later perusal at home.