Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

A Mighty Thorn In a Mighty Paw - Ch. 55

Wednesday, February 14, 2007

A leaf on the wind...

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3050    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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INT. SERENITY - BRIDGE

River’s hand hovers over a lever for a beat, then drops, abruptly slapping the lever down.

INT. PALADIN - HANGAR

Serenity’s engines suddenly lock into forward thrust position, causing her to burst from the hangar in a stomach-wrenching barrel roll with one final Radion emission. Her thrust blasts into the ceiling of the hanger, melting support trusses as well as the bulkhead above.

EXT. PALADIN - TOPSIDE

Silence. Wide angle view of Paladin’s upper side. Suddenly an eruption of metal and fire bursts from its hull.

Zoom into explosion. View travels vertically down through the explosion, through several wrecked decks to see Serenity blasting from the hangar, cannon fire zinging past her from all angles.

INT. SERENITY - BRIDGE

River sits in the pilot’s chair, a grim look on her face as she jinks the yoke this way and that. Mal hangs onto the console. Through the windshield we can see the upper hemisphere of a lovely planet. Cannon rounds fly past the windshield.

RIVER (almost too quiet to hear): I’m a leaf on the wind...

EXT. SPACE - BENEATH PALADIN

Cannon fire is erupting from a dozen weapons now revealed beneath the Paladin. Serenity dodges this way and that, missing some of the blasts by a hairsbreadth.

INT. PALADIN - BRIDGE

Chaos has ensued. Some techs have bolted from their seats, running for the door. Others work at their consoles, attempting to organize the crew. Madsen stands in the middle of the fray, his pistol trained on Gibson. Powell stands behind him.

The left viewscreen shows Serenity’s escape. The center screen shows the gaping fiery hole in the Paladin’s topside hull. The right screen is a field of static.

TECH: Sir, we’re losing atmo pressure on all decks forward of the command tower. I’m attempting to seal off the damaged zones…

Gibson ignores this.

GIBSON (gritting teeth, to Madsen): I will see to it you hang for this, Caius.

MADSEN (dryly): Literally, o

Comments
Thursday, 15 February 2007 00:03
What a BDEscape! That was soooo sweet. River appeared to be channeling the Wash, while Paul channeled the Book ("a gov't is a body of people, usually notably ungoverned."

Hopefully the Alliance will have to watch what they say from now on, since they're transmitting in the clear. If the Parliament was deemed to be 'not forgiving' by the Operative after Miranda, I'd hate to see how they react to this new development. They'd probably dispatch a whole passel of Operatives after our shiny crew, without broadwaving any warrants or reports like they did the first time.

And what will become of Paul and those who were left behind on the Paladin?

Shiny writin'
-MG
Thursday, 15 February 2007 02:36
Oh baby yeah! Now that's how you do a Big Damn Escape, with a Big Damn Trick as dessert!

:D

Really can't wait to see how this little escapade affects the Alliance's ability to be sneaky. They're bascially back to hand delivered messages for anything secret;D

BEB

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