Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

A Mighty Thorn In a Mighty Paw - Ch. 54

Friday, February 9, 2007

...and Checkmate.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3073    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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INT. PALADIN - HALL ADJ. TO HANGAR

Paul is dressed in a radiation suit with the hood hanging behind his back, working on the hangar entry panel, punching in codes and algorithms.

A pair of pilots round the corner and spot Paul working on the panel. They walk up, helmets in hand, curious expressions on their faces.

PILOT ONE: We heard there was a problem in the hangar. What’s…?

Paul drives a side-kick into Pilot One’s abdomen without looking up from his work. The man folds and drops to his knees, expelling a small amount of vomit. Paul fires a hook kick across Pilot Two’s jaw, the thick boot from the rad. suit jarring his head sharply to the left and spinning his body to the ground. Both men are still conscious.

PAUL: In a moment, this door is going to rise, allowing Radion emissions to seep into this hall. I suggest you two grab that dolly around the next corner and push it as far away as you can manage.

The men shakily climb to their feet. Paul points down the hall. They limp away, concerned looks between them.

Paul continues working on the panel. With a nod of satisfaction, a familiar green glow returns to the panel. Paul presses another button and the heavy door begins to rise.

INT. PALADIN - BRIDGE

The tech slams both hands down on his panel.

TECH: Sir, someone's broken the encryption! They’re opening the aft Hangar door.

MADSEN: Shame. How we looking, Powell?

POWELL (typing furiously): Twenty-five seconds.

Madsen nods.

MADSEN: Now, the only two places the exterior bay doors can be opened are Hangar Observation and here, by your voice command. So, (cocks his pistol) release Serenity.

GIBSON: No.

INT. PALADIN - HALL ADJ. TO HANGAR

Paul hits the panel again, halting the door once it’s a foot open. He flips his hood closed then jumps up and presses himself into the upper corner, digging his boots into the wall to support himself.

INT. SERENITY - BRIDGE

River flips a couple more switches, maneuvering the yoke at an

Comments
Friday, 09 February 2007 23:43
Holy crap! That Gibson is one totally evil and spiteful *tamade hundan*. I hope our valiant crew get out of this alive and that Paul manages to escape in one piece himself. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 10 February 2007 04:52
Sweet Yesu! And how much of an episode budget would have gotten blown on doing the SFX and VFX for Serenity's little pirrouette of death in the Paladin's hanger bay!?! Cuz I would have given something mighty valuable to have seen that go down:D

BEB
Saturday, 10 February 2007 05:01
SWEET. That was a neat trick to spread the radiation through the ship. You know, I wonder if Kaylee could have turned off the artificial gravity onboard Serenity so they wouldn't have been plastered against the walls by River's maneuvering. I'm not quite sure how antigrav works in the 'Verse.

I suppose Gibson's voice activated the Paladin's weapons, which probably means that they are automated, since there's a good chance that the Paladin is to large to sustain a big crew. I guess now we find out where Madsen's loyalties really lie- will he let the crew get vaporized as they try to escape, or will he get the techs working on overriding the voiceprint? And how is Paul going to get out of there alive? And what was the message??? TELL ME!!! ;)

Good work, and keep Serenity flying!

-MG
Sunday, 11 February 2007 22:29
Oh Lord. Checkmate indeed.

That was, to put it mildly, awesome.

This should be very interesting as the crew try to (seemingly) escape.

Bring on the next chapter!

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