Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

A Mighty Thorn In a Mighty Paw - Ch. 52

Sunday, February 4, 2007

One final Echo...<p><p><p>Here's a key to assist those who aren't versed in cinematograpy lingo and acronyms.<p>EXT. - External Camera shot<p>INT. - Internal Camera shot<p>CU - Close Up (those close shots where you can count the character's pores)<p>POV - Point of View (you see what the character sees)<p>SM - Slow Motion (speaks for itself)<p>NS - Normal Speed (ditto)<p>Pan - to move the camera laterally left or right<p>VO - Voice-over (Character can be heard, but not seen)

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INT. SERENITY - CARGO BAY

Overhead shot of rear of Cargo Bay, the sound of metal-on-metal repeatedly ringing throughout the bay. Pan over to see River and Echo One battling viciously, their movements crisp and deadly, the tide of battle appearing even for several beats.

Echo One snaps out a low front kick at River's shin. She shifts her leg only two inches to dodge it, then brings her sword up in her left hand to block the vicious overhead swing of his baton. With a swirling motion of her short sword, River guides the baton out to her left side (Echo One's right) and follows through with a whistling right roundhouse kick to his blond head. Echo One stumbles a beat, then attacks again, this time stabbing the end of the baton straight at River's face.

Using her empty right hand, River deflects the baton around her head, spinning into the deflection with her entire body, slamming the butt of her sword into Echo One's head. It strikes him in the same spot just kicked. River finishes the spin with a low roundhouse kick to the rear of Echo One's knees, taking them out from under him.

River steps back, sword at the ready.

RIVER: You might want to re-think your strategy.

ECHO ONE (slowly standing, in obvious pain): Even if you win this battle, where do you think you'll go? You'll never get off this ship.

RIVER: Let me worry about that.

Echo One swings at River’s head. His baton is blocked, and he swifly drops into a crouch, swinging at River’s knees. With a flick of her feet, River leaps over the baton, leaning her body toward Echo one and slamming the butt of her sword onto the top of his head. She continues into a forward flip, landing gracefully on the other side.

Echo One starts to stand, but stumbles, taking a knee. River stands, her back to Echo One, sword hanging by her side.

INT. PALADIN - HALL

Madsen marches purposefully down the hall, drawing a pistol from its holster. He checks the clip and chambers a round. He rounds a corner to find Bravo Team just coming

Comments
Monday, 05 February 2007 00:15
Uh oh, if it is not one thing it is another. I hope Paul manages to get Serenity away and in the clear and finds a way to survive his own self. I really don't like his evil scheming father one little bit. Fight scenes were awesome once again! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 05 February 2007 03:21
Again, incredible! I'm wondering how Paul could take down Charlie team that quickly, even though he's expertly trained. And how come he communicates with River in a way that nobody else does? (Not even Echo Leader) Maybe he's a psychic to some extent? Madsen didn't stop to take care of his crew, which shows what kind of an officer he is (the baaad kind!) And exactly what is that little box? Is it some sort of hacking module, or could it somehow cataclysmically take out the Paladin (and this was all planned.) Hey, I can dream. But then Paul wouldn't be staying on the ship...

I liked the samurai-style finish, and I also like how River cries at having to hurt her friend/enemy. It reminds me of Ender's Game, where he begins to love that which he then destroys. Being a psychic, she knows a lot about who she fights against, and at one time there was a whole lot of love inside River Tam. Then the Alliance turned it into a whole lot of kickbutt-ness, but first there was love. (There still is, obviously.)
Keep it up, HeWhoKicksAlot!

-MG
Monday, 05 February 2007 09:08
Wow. After much (appreciated) ass kicking and neck snapping, things finally start to look up. Then it all goes to hell in a handbasket shaped like a sealed bag with a device and disc in it. Bugger.

And, obviously, yay. Hijinks continue!
Monday, 05 February 2007 19:49
Oh...me thinks the whole "BDHs need radiation suits" strikes me as a big clue as to what Paul is gonna have to do to allow Serenity to escape:(

And I gotta give you props once again, HeWhoKicksAlot...the River vs. Echo One fight scene? Brilliantly written, especially the moment where River's almost about to decapitate Echo One. Though my knowledge of cinematography is kinda lacking...so certain acronyms for shots or angles went over my head;)

BEB

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