Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

A Mighty Thorn In a Mighty Paw - Ch. 51

Saturday, February 3, 2007

A little reciprocation...

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INT. SERENITY - CARGO BAY

River is pressed against the wall of the short shuttle entrance wall, eyes averted. She appears calm.

Echo One is carefully navigating down the stairs of the center stair well, crossing the landing, and ascending the stairs opposite. He glances down at his fallen comrades. Echo Two is slowly standing, one hand on his lower back, shaking his head as if to clear it. He picks up his rifle, giving Echo One a thumbs-up. Echo One uses military hand signals to indicate River’s postion, and for Echo Two to cross the Cargo bay deck with his eyes locked on her.

Echo Two complies, slowly backing across the deck, rifle aimed at River’s hiding spot. Echo One reaches the port catwalk and slowly approaches the alcove.

CU River’s face. She closes her eyes and smiles. View pulls away and out of alcove.

River darts from the hall, jumps up onto the railing and leaps toward the lift cable still hanging over the cargo bay. In the middle of the leap, she fires straight down at Echo Two. He gets off a shot as well, just before the sonic round blasts straight down into his helmet and then his neck. Vertebrae can be heard cracking from the sudden compression. The man crumbles to the deck.

Echo One fires as River leaps, also missing. He fires again as she swings Tarzan style from the cable. She lands on the opposite catwalk, darting into the opposite shuttle access hall. She is almost impossible to see in the semi-lit bay.

Echo One moves along the port catwalk, rifle trained on the alcove. He reaches up and reactivates his night vision.

Echo One POV - Night vision of cargo bay.

Echo One pauses, not quite coming into view of the alcove. He nods his head, reaches up and removes his helmet.

A young man’s handsome face is revealed. He has a scar running from above his left eye down to the center of his cheek. His eyes are an icy blue, devoid of emotion. He lowers his rifle.

ECHO ONE: River?

River’s head peeks around the corner. Her eyes are curious.

RIVER: Hi, Jonathan.

EC

Comments
Saturday, 03 February 2007 06:55
Echo Leader is another Academy student? Ooh...that's definitely a brilliant plot twist! Can't wait to see the blow-by-blow for the River-Johnathan fight;D

And why do I get the feeling that Mal will reget not shifting his aim to actually put a bullet in the Interegator's brainpan? Cuz the vibe of the latter figure not giving Mal the same courtesy is mighty strong:(

BEB
Saturday, 03 February 2007 10:29
I'm a mite confused about Mal's reason for now blowing the Interrogator's head off. Also worried that Paul may not be able to hold it together long enough for them to get away and for River to eliminate the last hold of his evil twisted father. As for River and Echo One, that is going to be some fight coming up! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 03 February 2007 23:27
Thanks for explaining why Mal treated the interrogator the way he did in your email, everything slides into place now. And yes, we are cool! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 04 February 2007 00:06
That was sweet. So was the goal of the Academy program the creation of elite Alliance commandos like Echo? I think River's talents would be wasted in such a role, where Alliance grunts could do that kind of work. Jonathan isn't a reader, I believe, or else Echo would have found River quite easily. Seafood probably pitted the commandos against the Academy students in order to hone their fighting skills. But Jonathan may have been exposed to some of the same treatments, or so he says. River's in for a fight, but she's wearing body armor, too.

Thanks for cluing me in that they're bound for Londinium, which I totally forgot. My bad. By the way, I think somebody called Mal's head shot, and I think it was me. Although it wasn't spot on. Congrats on another awesome chapter, and please keep them coming!

-MG
Monday, 05 February 2007 08:58
Another Academy student appears? And this has graduated? That should be a very interesting little fight.

Better than the last chapter, and considering the (awesome) quality of the last chapter, that's saying something.

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