Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

A Mighty Thorn In a Mighty Paw - Ch. 47

Thursday, January 25, 2007

Student and Teacher... shoulder to shoulder...

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3146    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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INT. SERENITY – CARGO BAY

Paul and River enter through the common area doorway, moving quietly. They re-check the four unconscious soldiers. Paul chooses the smallest one and flips him on his back, unclipping his flak vest. He holds it out to River.

PAUL: Here, mei-mei. No need to take unnecessary risks.

River accepts the vest slips it on. Paul helps her tighten it until it fits snugly. River moves her arms around, testing its reach.

RIVER: Good fit.

PAUL: You’re everything, little one. Without you, this is all for nothing. No matter what...

RIVER:...protect myself. I will. You too.

PAUL: I plan on it. Now, I’ll head aft...

RIVER: I’ll head forward.

Paul nods.

PAUL: The primary hangar doors are critical. Sealing them will drastically reduce the number of men you'll have to repel. Keep an eye on the maintenance entrances.

RIVER: I will.

PAUL: I have to report to my father before he gets suspicious.

RIVER (gaze shifted): Too late.

PAUL: Is it? Usually he’s more patient.

RIVER: It’s his second in command. He doesn’t want to take unnecessary risks, either. (squints uncertainly) And there's something else about him... Something uncertain...

PAUL: How many are coming?

RIVER (refocusing): Ten. They’re entering the aft entrance now.

PAUL: Well, let’s give them a proper greeting.

INT. PALADIN – BRIG

Gibson opens his mouth to say something to Mal when Jaxx steps up and whispers something in his ear. Gibson nods, his mouth taking a hard line.

GIBSON: We’ll talk later, Mr. Reynolds.

Gibson exits the Brig with Jaxx.

KAYLEE: Cap, what did he mean, "extract?"

MAL: You don’t wanna know, Kaylee.

JAYNE (groggily): What do we do now?

JAXX: You shut your mouth before I put a boot heel in it.

Jayne attempts to shoot the man a dirty look, but wavers and collapses on the cot.

INT. SERENITY – CARGO BAY

Paul and River step into the center of the cargo bay, weapons tucked away, hands behind their backs. The ten troops cross the hangar at

Comments
Thursday, 25 January 2007 02:19
Glad to see you back in action, Rob... Now just gotta catch up on my reading.
Keep on Kickin' it.
Thursday, 25 January 2007 03:55
Ooh...that was just freaking cool! Very Matrix-y...but totally better at the same time;)

BB
Thursday, 25 January 2007 07:14
Loved this, wish it was longer and can't wait to see what happens next. Hopefully River and Paul will rescue our Big Damn Heroes before Gibson gets round to extracting what he wants out of Mal's brainpan. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me

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