Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

A Mighty Thorn In a Mighty Paw - Ch. 42

Monday, January 1, 2007

A screenplay taking place not long after the events of "Serenity."<p>And one shall become two...

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INT. SERENITY -BRIDGE

CU of River's eyes as they snap open, wide as saucers. She sucks in a loud startled breath. Pull away to reveal her in the fetal postion. Pull away further and fade through cryo-unit lid, then through crates on top.

Pull away to see the lid slowly lift off and the crates fall to the floor.

Slow Motion - River rises slowly from the mist, her face sad and determined.

She steps out of the cryo-unit, crouching on the deck, rubbing her arms and torso. She shivers terribly and begins to cry.

RIVER: Sifu, no.

INT. PALADIN - BRIDGE

Captain Gibson walks confidently toward Paul, who stands frozen. Gibson walks within two feet of his son. Madsen watches with fascination.

CAPT. GIBSON: Don't fight it, son.

PAUL: Wha... what’s happening... to me? What did you say to me?

CAPT. GIBSON: Just a little phrase in a dead language from Earth That Was. (he watches Paul's discomfort a beat) Your dormant subconscious is re-emerging, the man you were meant to be.

He places an arm around Paul’s shoulders, leads him out a different door into a private office. Paul follows, zombie-like.

INT. PALADIN - CAPTAIN’S LOUNGE

Paul stands, looking entranced. Captain Gibson walks around him, admiring his physique.

PAUL: (confused) Father, I... I don’t understand. I feel so... angry.

GIBSON: The clarity will come, son. (half-sits on desk) You see, you were such a little spit-fire growing up. So much anger and aggression, but naturally talanted beyond belief. Introducing you to the martial arts gave you wonderful self-control, and you fully embraced their peaceful philosophy. However, a peaceful warrior isn’t of much use to the military. My friends in Psych worked with you on a nightly basis throughout your adolescence, embedding a detailed command structure in your subconscious, also locating and collecting those ferocious impulses you’d once displayed and tucking them away in a tidy little box. There they waited, ready to be set free when the time was rig

Comments
Monday, 01 January 2007 18:22
Uh oh, all that effort and the terrible end cost and the Agents foil Powell before he can transmit the code. *Shen goushi*, can things get any worse? The only happy part is finding out that Paul was programmed by his evil father so not in control of the outcome of his actions. Lucky we still have River, just hope she can do something to save our heroes. Hope Mal isn't so messed up he can't recover. Ali D :~)
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Monday, 01 January 2007 22:55
Very much enjoying how this story has developed. My apologies for not commenting sooner. My only complaint is that this chapter was too short! Looking forward to more.
Saturday, 06 January 2007 01:37
Nice, just got read it, sorry to be so tardy, wow!! Love it!

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