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Blue Sun Job, Part 12: Waiting

Friday, July 2, 2004

Mal's recollections as he waits uneasily for the Feds to make their next move.

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Blue Sun Job, Part 12: Waiting

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Chinese:

No critical dialog using actual Chinese characters

混蛋 = hwoon dahn (hundan) = bastard
哎呀 = Ai ya = damn
鬼 = guay = hell
他妈的 = ta ma duh = f*ck, or motherf*cking

Blue Sun Job, Part 12: Waiting
靑日 Job: Waiting

It’s him.

What had the Fed meant by that?

Mal tried to dig in his heels and hold back as the squad of MPs escorting him reached their shuttle. “What’s going on?” he demanded, straining to sound like an aggrieved, honest citizen. “Am I under arrest?”

His questions were ignored and his resistance was less

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Friday, 02 July 2004 22:16
Shiny... on and on we go i suppose
Friday, 02 July 2004 23:48
Oh Wow, had my heart in my gorram mouth most of the time. Hope they don't hurt our boy too much and can't help but wonder what the *diyu* they are up to. This is such an excellent story, I can't wait for each and every part. Shiny, *xie xie ni*, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 03 July 2004 00:49
More now please!!! Mal and Zoe are great. Echo amdobell here, my heart was in my throat with emotion or fear the entire time. Very heart tugging stuff. More, now, please:)
Wednesday, 07 July 2004 08:14
That was utterly emotionally convincing. The waiting for interrogation, the wearing oneself down before it. The pyschological torture. Are you some kind of evil mastermind?

Loved the ending! Espcially -
"Mal scowled. “Which is the exact point of the matter.” He jumped, such as he could with a strong, determined, drunk warrior woman plastered down on top of him. “Hey! Watch your hands. I ain’t gonna service you like some gorram bull put to pasture with a heifer in heat.”"

Hey! Watch your hands! Hee!

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