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Blue Sun Job, Part 11: Home Again...

Wednesday, June 30, 2004

The robbery complete, each of the others take up their part in the job while Mal and Zoe overcome obstacles to return home to Serenity.

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Blue Sun Job, Part 11: Home Again...


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Chinese:

No critical dialog using actual Chinese characters

混蛋 = hwoon dahn (hundan) = bastard
哎呀 = Ai ya = damn
鬼 = guay = hell

Blue Sun Job, Part 11: Home Again...
靑日 Job: Home Again...

Kaylee...

Monty's crewmen--a man and woman--came to alert. Kaylee looked over. They were nice enough, she supposed, but kinda on the grim and serious side. Ex-soldiers, like the captain and Zoe, but without their light, good humor.

Quickly ripping open the delivered crate, the two grinned. Kaylee did too. Sure enough looked like the job had gone smooth. Hidden beneath the metal blanks was a thick, thick layer of platinum coins.

"Let's get to

Comments
Wednesday, 30 June 2004 23:26
Arrghh! Yikes, don't let them gorram purplebellies hurt the Captain! Jayne better not have betrayed them, somehow I don't think he did. He sounded too happy and grateful but then you could just have been making it seem that way if you were feeling a mite on the sneaky side. Can't wait for the next part, please hurry! Loved the detail of the retinal scan. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 01 July 2004 01:31
I agree, I don't think that Jayne betrayed them (I hope not) Anyways, keep up the good work (read all the stories, loved them). Hurry up, I can barely wait.
Thursday, 01 July 2004 08:22
Heh, shiny. Drama!
Thursday, 01 July 2004 13:56
Wahh, how come no one will never let things go smooth for cappie? Hope inara can help him and the the blue hands stay a figment of river's imagination!
Thursday, 01 July 2004 20:37
I just caught up on this story in one large sitting. Bar none, word for word this entire story is just shiny. Personally id have preferred a little bit longer of a robbery but truly thats just if im looking for something to complain about. Next few episodes will be fun no doubt. I smell a Jayne hero approaching... Serenity and its crew can therefore officially start to panic!
Wednesday, 07 July 2004 08:01
That was so, so good. Again. How DO you do it? Loved Jayne's fondness for Mal (who's been delivering some rather unkind words as to his character in earlier chapters). Perfect on Wash and the waiting and the time it gives him to be suspicious. Great on Simon.
MAI
Monday, 18 October 2004 07:42
Still absolutely loving your story. I want to just sit and read every last chapter, but at the same time don't want it to end. You are an extremly talented writer.

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