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Blue Sun Job, Part 10: Going In

Tuesday, June 29, 2004

Mal & Zoe way-back-story, and the robbery of the Blue Sun treasury.

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Blue Sun Job, Part 10: Going In


Sequel to the









Chinese:

No critical dialog using actual Chinese characters

混蛋 = hwoon dahn (hundan) = bastard
他妈的 = ta ma duh = f*ck, or motherf*cking

Blue Sun Job, Part 10: Going In
靑日 Job: Going In

Zoe dozed off around sunrise. Mal watched her thoughtfully. He’d bet good money Wash got the same view--Zoe rolled over, facing away. She never was a cuddler.

Easing out of the bed, Mal crossed to the window, staring out at the Blue Sun treasury. Blue Sun... Blue. Beware the blue... He hadn’t really pondered on River’s ramblings before even though it was her got him thinking about pulling this job. He reached for his coat, pulling out from the pocket the little doodad River’d given him. The small disk was featureless until squeezed, then the surface flashed the

Comments
Wednesday, 30 June 2004 01:31
So very excellent and shiny! I love what you are doing with this story and really like the nuggets of the past between Zoe and Mal. I so want to read the next part, just don't want it to gorran end. *Xiexie ni*, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 30 June 2004 02:55
wow! Loved the descr of shadow and the first meeting of mal and zoe. Strange to see zoe so young and carefree though. Hopefully the feds are just a bump in the smooth plan
Wednesday, 30 June 2004 08:57
Cool stuff.
Wednesday, 30 June 2004 15:24
The Shadow and Ariel reflections were nice, and the heist was exciting. Don't wait too long for the next part!
Tuesday, 06 July 2004 09:55
Everything about this was amazing. From the excitement of the robbery to young Mal's ideas about appropriate behaviour. I found "Like as not he’d never leave this world, and never regret it" particularly poignant and had to admire its economy of words.

One day, I'd like to write half as well as you.

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