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Blue Sun Job, Part 5: Life That Was

Tuesday, June 1, 2004

Mal's and Zoe's relationship now and backstory are explored. Lots of sexual potential with lots of no-sex taking place. And a small G-rated nod to some of the slash fic I've run across.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4543    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Blue Sun Job, Part 5: Life That Was


Sequel to the




Chinese:

No critical dialog using actual Chinese characters

哎呀 = Ai ya = damn
混蛋 = hwoon dahn (hundan) = bastard
他妈的 = ta ma duh = f*ck, or motherf*cking

Blue Sun Job: Life That Was
靑日 Job: Life That Was

“Whew...” Mal let out a long, sighing breath he felt like he’d been holding since stepping off Serenity as he closed the door of their hotel room behind them. “哎呀, but that was creepifying.” He’d never dreamed checking into a hotel could be so gorram scary. Trying to look casual and in-character while hunting for familiar faces in a place where they had more than a little history of the could get them thrown in jail kind... And the hotel seemed be having a 他妈的 Fed convention. Almost rather face Reavers. At least the smarmy little bastard at the desk took their looking-over-their-shoulders unease for paranoia at being lovers sneaking away from her husband--apparently a specialty of the hotel now. And how, exactly, had Inara known that when she picked the place? Never mind. Not a thing to ponder on. Hmmph... there’d been a Companion promenading through the lobby like she was the queen of Sihnon, with a fawning ape of a 混蛋 Fed at her side grinning like he’d just won the gorram lottery.

Dropping his bag, Mal immediatel

Comments
Tuesday, 01 June 2004 22:33
Gorrammit, this is so shiny I need sunglasses to read it. Can't wait for the next part and more glimpses into Mal and Zoe's backstory. Very well written and just begging for more, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 02 June 2004 03:00
I continue to be amazed, keep up the excellent work :)
Wednesday, 02 June 2004 13:37
That was fantastic! Why is my life so busy I rarely get time to read other people's writing? Well, it ain't ever gonna get so busy I don't follow this story. Loved it. Damn near tore my heart out with all that M/Z UST. Shiny, shiny. And so happy and sassy too.

Thankyou. Must go back and read the rest....
Wednesday, 02 June 2004 16:36
All caught up now, and much the happier for it! What a writer you are. Marvellous. Deep insight into the characters, great plotting, funny and touching. I am in awe.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 02 June 2004 18:18
Guildsister, I've been loving this story, but this part is especially shiny! Excellent, excellent Mal/Zoe, true-voiced and heartbreakingly believable. Anxiously awaiting the next part. HurrySundown
Friday, 30 September 2011 19:10
Sooo shiny!! All good, but I especially love this part: There’d never been any discussion on the matter. Not then. Not later. Not ever. They walked out of the Alliance prison on Beta side-by-side. It was the moment they could have shaken hands and went their separate ways. Instead they turned a corner in unison and continued on together then and ever. Even the times they were apart or off in different directions for a spell, there was no questioning that it was temporary and the other would step back into place at any time. He hadn’t led and she hadn’t followed. They’d gone on their path together.
AAAA LOVE!!!

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