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Blue Sun Job, Part 4: Return to the Core

Thursday, May 27, 2004

Mal and Zoe arrive at the planet where they had been imprisoned after the war, facing more memories and challenges than they expected.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4500    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Thursday, 27 May 2004 23:09
Excellent and getting downright creepifying for Mal and Zoe. I laughed fit to bust at the Captain's reaction to Zoe in that dress but my favourite line was this one - *It took a particular kind of knack, Wash thought, to make the words 'good' and 'smooth' sound scary and ominious*. Excellent observation. Good story, can't wait for the next gorram part. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
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Friday, 28 May 2004 01:50
BC

I liked it and nice seque with Jayne and being all cleaned up. Mal should have told him to be careful as well. A cleaned up Jayne is all manner of dangerous to the womenfolk around.
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Friday, 28 May 2004 03:26

I hafta the Jayne/Angel reference is the funniest thing I've read in a month of sundays.
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Saturday, 29 May 2004 01:51
I love it, hurry up and post the next story. Keep up the good work!!!!
Tuesday, 01 June 2004 06:13
Good continuation on the story, keep up the good work :)

I enjoyed the Jayne/Adam Baldwin Angel insert, very well done.
Monday, 30 August 2004 06:54
Finally getting a chance to catch up on this story, super shiny chapter! Loved the Jayne/Hamilton bit...too funny! And Zoe in a dress! :-D
Friday, 30 September 2011 07:30
SHINY PERFECTION!!! Many LOL moments!!XD the humor is JUST like the show!XD

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