Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Sweet surrendering Pt5: I Only Want You

Wednesday, July 19, 2006

Kaylee and Inara enjouy a sweet and sexy get away. this is so not for kids, and has some mushy woman to woman love making, so you are all warned.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2483    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer time: I didn’t come up with the lovely characters, I just get to spend some quality time with them when my love life is lacking. They all belong to Joss and his ‘Mutant Enemy’ company.

Also once again, just to hammer it in: This is not for kids! I don’t care how advanced you think you are…you saw the warning!

Now thank yous: Washie, hun as always your shiny aura of awesomeness has had its profound effects, once again, in helping me with my story. Josh Holme and the rest of the guys from the Eagles of Death Metal must be thanked for the title.

On to our story:

I Only Want You

Time seemed to contract when Kaylee had returned to Inara’s shuttle the night before they had arrived on Persephone. It all seemed like a dream run in fast motion; Inara felt almost drunk. The last four days time had refused to run at a normal pace; Inara was certain that if it weren’t for Kaylee standing next to her with her arm around her waist she would be much more bothered. Instead all she had to be bothered about was when the woman who managed the small bed and breakfast would stop eyeing them suspiciously, and tell them where there room was. Inara sighed, wondering if Kaylee was feeling as impatient as she. It was almost torture, just how much she wanted to get into their room with her lovely lover and enjoy the short time they had together.

Kaylee, while smiling and nodding at what the manager was saying, squeezed Inara in reassuringly. The manager turned to get their room key and disappeared into a small back office briefly, long enough for Kaylee to press her lips to Inara’s ear and whisper; “Shh…not long now bao bai…then you're mine.” Kaylee’s tongue slid quickly up the outer ridges of Inara’s sensitive ear, causing the companion to moan quietly as the manager returned. The look on her face was priceless, Inara thought; it was a mix of ‘Oh that’s what it was about these two,’ and, ‘Well, you would hope they would be more subtle about it.’ Inara stifled a grin and thanked the woman while picking u

Comments
Wednesday, 19 July 2006 14:22
So Cowboy. DUDE! You write the Inara/Kaylee as good as Jayne shoots a gun, Babe. One of the best things about how you played out this fic chapter is your having Kaylee administer the loving for the most part. A lovely twist, seein' as how her partner for the night is a companion. You made Kaylee teach the Guild Sister a thing or two, and me as well! Sigh. This thing made me miss my man something AWFUL, which was a pre-existing condition for me anyhow but was made more anxious after I read this gem from you.

Keep writing. I'm loving it. And can hardly wait to see what 'Nara does to upstage that Kayleefyin' hotness I read of yours.

Great lines abound, but here's a couple of my faves:"Faster than if she had had to pull a crazy Ivan, Kaylee laid waste to her simple blue shirt and olive drab three quarter length pants. She tentatively moved toward Inara, her hand having a need to reach out and see if the other woman was real, not just some ethereal apparition. " and--- "....creating a cloud of warm Kaylee scent." Sigh. Cowboy, this is GOODNESS!
Thursday, 20 July 2006 11:10
*Inara tried not to imply what was no doubt obvious about their stay, but it was no use, it was as blatant as Jayne’s tact with women.*
-BWAHAHAHAHAHA !!!!!

Inara undressing for Kaylee = GUH!

*Faster than if she had had to pull a crazy Ivan, Kaylee laid waste to her simple blue shirt and olive drab three quarter length pants.*
-BWAHAHAHAHA !!!! #2

*her stomach clenched, her sex ached and she*
-I do feel compelled to mention my complete distaste for using the word sex in this manner, but it doesn't affect my enjoyment of your fic in the least

*In a flurry of quick motion Kaylee shed the offending garment, creating a cloud of warm Kaylee scent.*
-GUH! #2

Very very very good slash fic Cowboy, you need to keep 'em coming as fast as you can (school work, song writing, and social life notwithstanding, of course).
Thursday, 20 July 2006 13:33
OK, OK, This Calls for a "When Harry met Sally" moment

YES, YES, YES, YES,....LOL

Very good cowboy....I must say indeed....makes me miss my man a little also washie......

*making sure her love could completely ride the lightning*
Thursday, 20 July 2006 13:49
Hope you enjoyed the "Thesaurus"
references in the past comments......

Thursday, 20 July 2006 14:22
WHOAH! Damn, that was good. Really good!

This story was dripping with so much goodness. I'm really not sure where to start. O.o I need a second to breath. :)

There were lots of great touches and lines that everyone's already mentioned. The interaction with the manager springs to mind, and Inara's undressing scene too.

I liked the way this part was written:

*Inara lay panting, eyes closed, her head being stroked softly. She curled into Kaylee’s protective hold wanting to say so much, but failing to grasp the words to express it.*

It was just a nice (and even vulnerable) moment. I felt that I was totally inside Inara's head.

Also, I chuckled at this part:

*“Shhh…. Save the noises for the really fun part.” Kaylee chuckled from somewhere just above Inara’s naval.*

This story was sexy, playful and completely in character.

It was conveyed in a mature fashion too. This had a lot of heart, and real emotion in it. I loved it!

- Cos.
Thursday, 20 July 2006 18:37
Oh...my...gentle...Jesus...this was HOT!

Cowboy...I salute thee and turn a deep shade of green in envy, cuz you have definitely taken Kaynara loving to a whole new level! I really can't wait to see how you top this chapter with Inara's response to this moment of pure intimacy from Kaylee:D

BEB

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