Ok doki, didn’t make up these characters I just have my way with them. All creation credits should be forwarded to the Joss.
To Washie, you know who you are…come forward and touch the gleaming guitar award, cos this wouldn’t have started without ya. There are a couple of other civilians who I would also like to thank, but I think naming them would be a bit awkward. Also thanks to G and R for the title, I’m not a big fan…but it fit.
Finally people the name Kyuss is pronounced Kai-uss.
Paradise City:
Kaylee smiled again as she felt Inara slide her body into a hold. Kaylee cocked her head to about where she thought Inara would be, eyes closed so tightly. Inara smiled, putting one of the deliciously ripe strawberries covered in chocolate into her mouth. She held it there with her tongue then leaned in and delicately pressed it into Kaylee’s mouth in a deep kiss.
Kaylee’s eyes shot open, her arms sliding around Inara, pulling her head in to deepen the kiss. Kaylee moaned into Inara’s mouth, her hands touching, massaging her lover's lithe and sexy body, the flavour of the sweet fruit mingling with the taste of Inara’s mouth. She pulled back briefly to swallow what remained of the succulent fruit, an image of her love's sweetness fluttering across her mind.
“ ‘Nara…mmm.” Inara smiled again, pulling Kaylee to her.
“Mmmm…a good choice I take it?” Inara smiled again, happy she could please her lover.
“mmm… not as good as something else we did today.” She kissed Inara deeply again, enjoying the faint taste of chocolate in her lover's mouth. The two lingered holding each other, till Inara motioned that the two should retire to the rather plush bed. In moments as swift and graceful as a setting sun Inara crossed the room, picking up the box, to join Kaylee in reclining on the large bed.
Kaylee lay across Inara’s Body, her head resting comfortably on Inara’s right shoulder. She half sat, half lay in the companion's lap, Inara having one arm wrapped about her waist, the companion's hand snugly strok
I liked the meeting with Kyuss and Monica too. 'The old days are fading.' Very ominous!
This series is getting better and better with each instalment. I loved the shopping spree, and the fact that Kaylee may not know elegance/style but recognised good metal. It was a nice touch.
The strawberry scene was brilliantly written. I loved the descriptions and the playful sexual nature of it.
The sexual interaction between Kaylee and Inara is well written and handled too. It's vivid and oozes with sexual energy and heart.
Supershiny job once more Cowboy. I'm chapping at the bit to read the next part.
10/10!
- Cos.
~I love this descriptive language, very nice.
I love that Inara gets to dress casually, since we never once see that in the series or BDM.
Inara’s voice clattered like water onto rocks in a cool pond.
His voice cut like a welding torch through tin foil.
~More very good descriptiveness
I love that there is some plot development here, good stuff Cowboy. Of course, I disliked Monica immediately, which I am sure was your intention. I am also very curious to know what the explanation holds.
Gotta say...so wanted Kaylee to smack that pretentious bitch upside the head for her ignorant comments. Would have made quite the scene;)
But I have to admit...I am concerned with this new development of probable negative changes affecting the Guild..definitely wanna see what comes next;)
BEB
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