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Blue Sun Job, Part 3: Going Smooth

Sunday, May 16, 2004

Everything on the Blue Sun Job is progressing smoothly--give or take a bit of Fed trouble.

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Blue Sun Job, Part 3: Going Smooth


Sequel to the


Chinese:

Again, no critical dialog using actual Chinese characters, just a few exclamatory words and phrases, and most of the strong cussing. In Jayne’s section, if you don’t want to look up the Chinese characters, you can pretty much read in a wide variety of cuss words at will.

懂吗? = dong ma? = do you understand?
哎呀! = Ai ya! = damn!
鬼 = guay = hell
混蛋 = hwoon dahn (hundan) = bastard
他妈的 = ta ma duh = f*ck, or motherf*cking
狗屎 = go se = crap

Blue Sun Job: Going Smooth
靑日 Job: Going Smooth

“Someone Alliance.”

Monty stared at Mal fixedly. Mal could see the gears clicking. Monty’s eyes darted around the bar.

“Maybe this isn’t the right place to have this conversation,” Mal said.

“No, no. We’re fine,” Monty said, a titch more nervous sounding than Mal’d heard in quite some time. The big guy was generally nothing if not cool and self-assured. “Just don’t use that word out loud in here again.” Alliance. He paused, reconsidering. “Leastwise, not unless you got some powerful cuss words attached to it.”

Monty’s love of the Alliance rivaled Mal’s and Zoe’s... save for that one exception. “Gorram it, Mal,” Monty hissed, leaning over the table toward them. “ ‘Sides the two of you, ain’t but two on my own crew know I got..” he mouthed the words, “an Alliance connection.. It’s not a card I’ll play lightly. 懂吗?”

“Yes. I appreciate that. The score’s worth it, in my estimation. And he’d be taking a minimal risk, giv

Comments
Sunday, 16 May 2004 13:32
Great! I really can't wait until the next chapter. The story is flowing nicely and I loved your Jayne bit.
Sunday, 16 May 2004 18:02
Wonderful and I just love River. I have a feeling that her gift for the Captain is going to come in mighty handy. Just hope Monty's fed contact doesn't betray the gorram lot of them.
Very shiny, Ali D :~)
"Doing the impossible makes us mighty".
Monday, 17 May 2004 04:58
Its shaping up to be a good story, still don't completely understand what that gadget actually is but meh :)

Well done.
Friday, 28 May 2004 13:25
I'm really enjoying this story. More, please!
Friday, 30 September 2011 05:29
Mal interrupted. “Zoe did some violence to hers a while back.”
Hehe go Zoe!!! XDXD this story is PURE SHINY!!!!

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