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Truthsome, Part IV: Darkness

Monday, March 29, 2004

Part IV: Mal learns his home world is gone.

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Truthsome, Part IV: Darkness



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“Shadow was gone.” It appeared to require repeating. Uncomprehending expressions met him on every face. All except Zoe and the Shepherd. Both had heads down in an almost identical prayerful manner with hands folded. It was a mite unsettling.

“Gone?” Jayne, of course. “How can a planet get gone?”

“Still a rock there, spinning in space. Nothing else.” Mal stopped. He'd never said that out loud before. The words rested strangely on his ears. Unreal. We're all dreaming.

The Shepherd stirred. “I'll tell it, if you want, son” he said softly. Mal shrugged and refilled his cup with whiskey.

“Shadow was the only terraformed moon of a gas giant,” Book said. His voice sounded to Mal like a school teacher talking about something from the ancient past, not a place he could see in his head as bright and alive as the day he'd left. “Tide locked so the days and nights were about sixty hours each.” He glanced at Mal for confirmation. He nodded.... days of light with the shadows of twilight long and deep. Endless nights of stars stretching on and on...

“The sun...” the Shepherd hesitated.

“Go on,” Mal murmured.

“It flared. Not quite a nova but incredibly hot for days on end. Burned that world. I recall it said that the oceans reached the boiling point, and the sand on the shore fused into glass. There were,” he paused, his analytical tone shaky, “no survivors.”

Mal nodded. “No survivors,” he repeated. “Except for the entire Alliance garrison, which had pulled out a week earlier.”

“My God,” Book breathed. Mal felt the Shepherd’s shock like a physical thing, like the preacher had just taken a slug between the eyes. “You bla

Comments
Tuesday, 30 March 2004 00:26
Excellent! Very much holding my gorram breath for the next part. "Xiexie ni", Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 31 March 2004 05:18
Oh, you can feel Mal's pain seep right through this, excellent job Guildsister.
Wednesday, 31 March 2004 17:13
This is an awesome series so far. Excellent writing, Guildsister! I love how you portray Mal and Zoe and the rest of the crew. :) I also like your backstory for Mal and Zoe.
Wednesday, 05 May 2004 14:49
I assume the fate of Shadow was inspired by the line from the theme song that goes, "Burn the land and boil the sea."
MAI
Sunday, 03 October 2004 09:09
This just gets better with each chapter. This line nearly made me cry

"I never expected I’d make it back there alive no how, but I always thought it would be there waiting if I ever did.”

You have a great talent for writing. Keep it up. I can't wait to read the next part. Mai
Monday, 30 January 2006 22:48
Okay, you are prophetic:

Simon, shocked and more than a bit disbelieving. That boy thought he knew so damn much that anything he didn't know just couldn't be quite real. And, sure enough, it was Simon who first spoke up.

“How is it we never heard about this? A whole world, an entire colony wiped out like that?”

It's like you saw the plot of the BDM coming.


I have to say--I can't imagine Mal telling the others about Zoe and him in bed like that. Too intimate. I can see it happening, and him thinking it and NOT including it in his story, because it's so intimate that he feels like he has to hold that detail back.

Otherwise, this story is really well written and compelling.
Thursday, 29 September 2011 18:43
Mal nodded slowly. “The night they finally let me out of there, I was laying in my bunk, staring up. There were these little high windows all around. Couldn't see nothing out of them but a tiny slice of sky. So I was laying there staring at that slice of the stars out in the Black, thinking that was the one thing that was still there, the one thing they couldn’t take. And I wasn't sure it was enough.
Perfect tie in with Mal for the whole series!!! He and Simon in Serenity the pilot, Simon:" that's not much" Mal:"it's enough"
Burn the land and boil the sea, You can't take the sky from me! Shiny Perfection!!!

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