Truthsome, Part IV: Darkness
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“Shadow was gone.” It appeared to require repeating. Uncomprehending expressions met him on every face. All except Zoe and the Shepherd. Both had heads down in an almost identical prayerful manner with hands folded. It was a mite unsettling.
“Gone?” Jayne, of course. “How can a planet get gone?”
“Still a rock there, spinning in space. Nothing else.” Mal stopped. He'd never said that out loud before. The words rested strangely on his ears. Unreal. We're all dreaming.
The Shepherd stirred. “I'll tell it, if you want, son” he said softly. Mal shrugged and refilled his cup with whiskey.
“Shadow was the only terraformed moon of a gas giant,” Book said. His voice sounded to Mal like a school teacher talking about something from the ancient past, not a place he could see in his head as bright and alive as the day he'd left. “Tide locked so the days and nights were about sixty hours each.” He glanced at Mal for confirmation. He nodded.... days of light with the shadows of twilight long and deep. Endless nights of stars stretching on and on...
“The sun...” the Shepherd hesitated.
“Go on,” Mal murmured.
“It flared. Not quite a nova but incredibly hot for days on end. Burned that world. I recall it said that the oceans reached the boiling point, and the sand on the shore fused into glass. There were,” he paused, his analytical tone shaky, “no survivors.”
Mal nodded. “No survivors,” he repeated. “Except for the entire Alliance garrison, which had pulled out a week earlier.”
“My God,” Book breathed. Mal felt the Shepherd’s shock like a physical thing, like the preacher had just taken a slug between the eyes. “You bla
You can't take the sky from me
"I never expected I’d make it back there alive no how, but I always thought it would be there waiting if I ever did.”
You have a great talent for writing. Keep it up. I can't wait to read the next part. Mai
Simon, shocked and more than a bit disbelieving. That boy thought he knew so damn much that anything he didn't know just couldn't be quite real. And, sure enough, it was Simon who first spoke up.
“How is it we never heard about this? A whole world, an entire colony wiped out like that?”
It's like you saw the plot of the BDM coming.
I have to say--I can't imagine Mal telling the others about Zoe and him in bed like that. Too intimate. I can see it happening, and him thinking it and NOT including it in his story, because it's so intimate that he feels like he has to hold that detail back.
Otherwise, this story is really well written and compelling.
Perfect tie in with Mal for the whole series!!! He and Simon in Serenity the pilot, Simon:" that's not much" Mal:"it's enough"
Burn the land and boil the sea, You can't take the sky from me! Shiny Perfection!!!
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