Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Captainy Things

Saturday, April 1, 2006

Mal takes a walk through Serenity's halls... a little M/I too..

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3851    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Title : Captainy Things

Not Mine : All the characters and little plot references belong to Joss & Co.

Mal bid Wash goodnight as he left the bridge, knowing that later, Zoe would venture up to fall asleep in her husband’s arms. Just as she had done countless nights before. He began his nightly walk through, venturing down the stairs, hearing his footsteps echo through her, clanking like metal on metal. He ran his hands along her cold corridor walls, feeling her vibrate beneath his fingertips. It had become a dance, a nightly tango through her halls, from one end of the ship to the other. It had started years ago when he first bought her, mostly as a precaution to make sure that things weren’t fallin’ off of her in the wee hours. Over time, it became a ritual.

Tonight he walked the same path as always. First he passed through the hall lined with the hatches leading to the primary crew’s bunks. They were his own, Jayne's, Wash and Zoe’s, and Kaylee’s. Kaylee’s bein’ the one lined with all the foofera and lights. He smiled as he passed it, knowing the young woman’s dreams were somewhere between spinnin’ engine parts and a full on exam by the young doc. The latter he found a little creepifyin’ after hearin’ about it for the third time.

He left the hall and entered into the inviting half light of the galley. He randomly pushed in two wicker chairs and plucked a few grapes out of the basket at the center of the table. He made a mental note of the pile of dishes in the sink. Seemed Jayne had neglected his turn again. From there he drifted down the hall into the engine room where he stood for a moment in the reddish glow of the operating lights. He listened to the hum of the engine as she spun in her chamber, and he patted her gently. The dull racket was a comfort to him. He much preferred it to no movement at all...

Outside he took the staircase down to the infirmary and he glanced through the windows. The sterile interior stayed lit by bright white lights, and sat still as a museum, in one of her mo

Comments
Saturday, 01 April 2006 22:10
Very shiny! Loved Inara playing the mistress to her Captain and Mal then continuing on his way with his first true love. Ah, Serenity, how you play with us. Wonderful, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 01 April 2006 23:27
Great ficlet...but I am a mite confused about a couple of things - that could be addressed in more stories, perhaps? ;) - you have here:

1. Uh...why is Jayne in the passenger dorms? Is this subtle Rayne or Jayne/Simon (or even Jayne/Book, a combo that is kinda "ugh" right off the bat)?

2. Uh...why has Inara violated her "no servicing the crew" policy? Not that I hate the idea, cuz Mal/Inara is some good stuff to read (and write one of these days), but I know that Inara was quite adamant about that rule.

All in all, an excellent piece of work...with a sincere hope for more;)

BEB
Sunday, 02 April 2006 01:14
Although I'm not usually a fan of ships that aren't canon.. Mal/Inara being canon unfulfilled... I did enjoy this very much. Was one with the Cap'n walking thru our beloved Serenity and thought you had him spot on.

Thank you, this was fine.
Sunday, 02 April 2006 03:44
Okay, OMG, I just realized that I put Jayne in the wrong bunk. No hidden meaning, I wrote this at like 2:00 in the morning when I couldn't sleep(That's a little wierd in itself)and I can't believe I didn't notice it when I posted this! PLEASE FORGIVE ME, I'm usually a detailed Browncoat...the M/I thing? I just love M/I (It's an addiction, truthfully.)Thanks for the comments!
Sunday, 02 April 2006 21:48
Did a smallish editing job to fix the bunk issue...it kept eatin' at me...(One of the burdens of bein' a writer I reckon!)
Sunday, 04 June 2006 12:55
um, have i mentioned how much i love this???

b
Friday, 08 September 2006 15:09
Very well done! Serenity is always Mal's first love, and he always comes back to her!

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