Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Afterlife: Parts V & VI

Wednesday, March 22, 2006

Mal and Inara face an unanswered question ,and come closer than ever to admitting their feelings for each other...Zoe gives Mal a piece of her mind.

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Title: Afterlife Parts V & VI

Not Mine: All the characters and little plot references belong to Joss and Co...

Setting: Takes place after the movie. (Some spoilers). Everyone tries to move on. This part picks up where Part IV left off...

V

Mal entered the empty kitchen, and in the comforting half light he went behind the stove and poured a cup of tea from the iron pot. With great effort he pulled out one of the wicker chairs and sank down under the weight of all the decisions he was facing. He was used to having the fate of others in his hands, but he never took it lightly, and knowing what needed to be done didn’t make it any easier to do. What was easier was to stay put and wear away the hours and the days. He took a sip of the hot liquid and felt it course through him as he lowered his head into his hands.

Inara stood quietly watching him in the doorway as her heart skipped a beat. Part of her wanted to turn and run, he hadn’t seen her yet, and he didn’t have to. A larger part of her wanted to reach out to him, despite the pain it might cause her, just as she’d done before. She folded her slender arms against her floor length sleeveless peach silk gown and bit her lower lip. The question of whether she would be staying or leaving remained unanswered between them, as did so much else. She had been taught to expertly read and understand a man, and his desires, but the Captain confounded her like no other. As much as she tried to reason herself out of it, she cared for him, and as much as she tried to deny it, she was in love with him.

“Mal?”

He lifted his head and turned at the sound of her nightingale voice behind him. The room’s glow seemed to change sources and radiate from her.

“Hi there,” he told her, “I didn’t hear you come in.” Her long black hair fell loosely around her shoulders in waves, the way he liked it. His blue eyes drifted over her, lingering over her beautiful face, then drifted down over her dress, admiring the way it clung to her curves.

She entered the

Comments
Wednesday, 22 March 2006 22:44
Oh yay. This was lovely. Very well written. I also backtracked to your other chapters since I managed to miss them.

I'm most definitely a Mal/Inara shipper. So a big thank-you for writing this.

I'm looking forward to the next part!
Taya
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 22 March 2006 22:45
AWESOME! I like the Zoe/Mal talk- it sounds like something she'd do after she gets fed up!
Thursday, 23 March 2006 00:12
It's time for Mal to tell Inara why he is so torn by his love for her then let Inara make up her mind, for once and for always. Lovely to see Zoe come out of her mourning to speak some words of sense to him. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
2X2
Thursday, 23 March 2006 02:15
Ah, yes! Excellent to see Zoe give Mal a piece of her mind... Very nice and angsty Mal/Inara moment too.. can't wait for the next part!
Thursday, 23 March 2006 03:50
go Zoe! woo!

man, the angst...angsty...yeesh, so fabulous
Thursday, 23 March 2006 06:07
Ooh...keep it up! Me wants some M/I hot fluff;)

BEB
Thursday, 23 March 2006 14:22
Lovin the M/I angst! Will or won't he, I must know... Thank you for a great story, can't wait for the next!
MIRANDAISTHEKEY
Saturday, 25 March 2006 21:32
i'm seriously lovin' it. keep 'em comin' at a rather fast pace!!!!
Thursday, 23 August 2007 16:18
It's good to see how you are staying true to the characters. It's not always easy to keep their voices so clear, but you've got it!

:-)
Saturday, 22 December 2007 23:05
HOLY CRAP

This is awesome!!!!!!!!!!

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