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Afterlife: Parts I & II

Saturday, March 18, 2006

Post Serenity movie(Spoilers). The untimely loss of their friends forces the rest of Serenity's crew to take a chance on truly living...

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Title: Afterlife Parts I & II (Will be ten altogether)

Not Mine: All the characters and little plot references belong to Joss and Co...

Setting: Takes place after the movie.(Some spoilers).Everyone tries to find their own way to move on.

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Serenity’s rotating engine hummed and thumped in a comforting rhythm that had become as familiar to Kaylee as her own heartbeat. With her eyes still closed, she smiled warmly as she hovered in that glorious place between asleep and awake, when dreams are at their most vivid. She stretched her slender form beneath the tattered, quilted blanket. Her bare leg brushed against his and she savored the sensation. She slowly opened her clover and almond eyes to focus on the sleeping form of Simon Tam, his handsome face inches from hers.

Side by side they were unceremoniously sprawled out on a makeshift bed on the engine room floor. She took advantage of the stolen moment to lovingly glance over him, from his sleep tousled black hair and strong jaw line , to the way his cheek was pressed into the blanket beneath them.The circumstances that had kept them apart were banished now, their reasons seeming so small compared to the scheme of things. Compared to what they had all been through in the weeks past.

She was truly happy, but those who knew her would say she’d always been happy. This was different, she was in love, and the feeling confused her terribly. She felt a guilt beyond what she’d ever known. She had no right to be happy, now that everything had fallen apart. Now that Book and Wash were gone. Not for the first time since their deaths she began to cry.

She rolled over to turn away from Simon, not wanting to wake him. Her tears slipped down her full cheeks and she lifted the back of her hand to wipe them away as she sniffled softly.

A gentle arm wrapped over her bare shoulder and Simon pulled her to him in a warm embrace. He lowered his lips into her honey gold hair and breathed her in. His warm breath on her ear sent chills do

Comments
Saturday, 18 March 2006 21:13
Nice start to what will be an enjoyable series, I'm sure.

I like the characterizations of Mal and River and their interactions. Although I'm a little concerned by your description of the next parts ... will this be a Zoe/Jayne relationship? Not that's there's anything wrong with that, but in general I'm not a fan of Jayne with - well, anybody!

But that's why we all get to play in the 'verse, then we can make it what we want. I can't wait to read the next parts. Great start!
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 18 March 2006 22:15
Excellent work, all very believable from Kaylee's concern for Zoe's feelings and what Wash would want to River's questioning as to whether or not she was part of Mal's crew (she already knew, but she wanted to hear him say it :) ).

Keep up the good work and I look forward to more.

-goblueguy
Sunday, 19 March 2006 01:22
Thankyou for your comments...Not to worry, it won't be a Zoe/Jayne relationship. I stick pretty close to formula.Not to give away too much, but it'll be a conversation between the two about Book. :)
Monday, 20 March 2006 07:42
The characters are all written very well. I can't wait to see how you write Jayne and Zoe. Nice Job!
Tuesday, 21 March 2006 17:06
Vrey nicely done - such a sweet finish with the dinosaurs!
Sunday, 28 May 2006 15:20
“Don’t move the dinosaurs,” she told him.
He smiled at her, “Wasn’t plannin’ on it.”
*smile* nice touch.

b
Thursday, 23 August 2007 16:05
This is sweet and it's a nice soft beginning, since it is essentially a follow-up to the BDM.

Nice!
:-)
Saturday, 22 December 2007 22:52
*Grinning ear-to-ear*

This is gonna be good
Wednesday, 06 October 2010 18:04
Liking it very much, especially the "Captain Daddy" feel of the interaction between River and Mal. Gives me some warm and fuzzies.

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