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Afterlife : Parts IX & X

Wednesday, March 29, 2006

Conclusion to the series. Mal deicides what the crew must do, but how far will he carry his blame for the ones they lost?

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Title : Afterlife Parts IX & X (Conclusion)

Not Mine : All the characters and little plot references belong to Joss & Co...

Setting : Takes place after the movie. (Some spoilers). Everyone tries to move on. This part picks up where part VIII left off....

IX

Hours later Mal woke and shrugged away the fog of sleep as he watched Inara breathe, still fast asleep at his side. Her hair had fallen across her cheek, and her perfect lips slightly parted were a powerful inviting sight. He needed to think, and he found that increasingly difficult with the beautiful Companion warm and naked beside him.

He carefully slipped out of his bunk without waking her and retreated to the thought provoking sanctuary of a hot shower. He turned his back to the cascade of warm water as he pondered the state of their situation. True enough, he was grateful to the vicious Operative for two reasons. He’d repaired their ship to the fullest extent, and he’d possibly bought them a reprieve from the Alliance seeking the Tams.

He was not optimistic that arrangement would be anything but temporary. He thought it best to disappear back into civilization for a while, and put some distance between where they’d been and where they were headed. The massaging heat of the water washed over him from his scarred cheek and bruised shoulders to the small black tattoo at his hip. He stood still in the steamy waterfall for uncounted minutes before he bent over to turn the water off as he found his resolve. They needed to move on, he thought, as he ran a towel roughly over his face and his hair. Each in their own way, but also as one. And they needed to hear him say it.

When he descended back down into his bunk he found Inara waiting for him, standing in the center of the room, breathtaking, wearing only the sheet from his bed. Her ebony hair lay draped over her bare shoulders and her porcelain skin possessed an undeniable glow. Her lips curved into a seductive smile, “ I was tempted to come and find you,” she told him as she h

Comments
Thursday, 30 March 2006 03:01
Not a bad conclusion here...if not quite in character, at least for Inara IMHO. A little too "romance" film and not enough Jossian ambiguity as we got with Serenity's ending. But that's ok....fan fic is for options, not mirroring;)

Besides, I wanna see what you'll have the crew do next....:P

BEB
2X2
Thursday, 30 March 2006 03:37
Quote: Inara bit her trembling lip and lifted her chin, “But, it’s not enough that I love you,” she managed sadly, “I’m not enough, I guess that’s your answer then...”She turned away from him as tears threatened to spill down her flushed cheeks.

She made it two steps before he reached for her. In one motion he looped one arm around her waist and turned her back to him, pulling her body into his. He lifted his hand to her cheek, tilting her face to his, “Look at me, darlin’” he pleaded. She slowly opened her dark eyes and met his gaze, “You’re everything and all to me...” her lip trembled as he leaned closer, “I love you...I need you...and we go forward together. Always.”

She couldn’t respond before his lips met hers in a passionate kiss that cast away any remaining doubts from her mind.


Ai ya!! My heart is melting!! Very fine! I enjoyed this story muchly! Do write again!
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 30 March 2006 08:43
This was a great story!! Love the Mal/Inara interaction and sweet romance (without being sappy). Please write more soon!
Friday, 31 March 2006 00:21
Thanks all for the comments! I wanted a definate ending for all us Mal/Inara hopeless romantics...I LOVE the movie, and "Good answer" was sooo sweet, but it made me want to scream! I wanted at least a little kissin'! *Sigh* I guess that is what fan fic is for...so true :)
MIRANDAISTHEKEY
Friday, 31 March 2006 04:47
it was beautiful. i loved every second of it.
Thursday, 23 August 2007 16:40
I'm a sap, I'll admit it, but this was just lovely. Thanks for putting together a great, compact little package of post-BDM recovery for us!

:-)
Saturday, 22 December 2007 23:41
That was great... you even managed to get all the character quirks that the crew have.
Bravo

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