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Bed and Wine: Part 20

Monday, March 27, 2006

Pieces. NC-17

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Bed and Wine: Part 20

By Kaynara

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Pieces. NC-17

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Thanks to Grimlock for the consult.

It’s Joss’s verse....

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Slick limbs and wet hair. Sluggishness and the smell of sex. He tugged her perspiration-drenched body atop his own, pressed a kiss to the top of her head. She laid her cheek to his chest, murmuring into the skin above his heart so the words tickled.

“I love you.”

He stroked her hair.

“I love you,” he whispered back. But she might already have been sleeping.

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He found her in the bay; little witch had got into into his weights.

Was just over a week since big brother cut the cast off her leg, removed the enhancers. Lil’ Kaylee made it somethin’ of a celebration, bakin’ a cake with real-sugar frosting and coverin’ Crazy Girl’s face with congratulatory kisses. When Jayne’d seen what she done, he’d got a great urge to shake her. What exactly we celebratin’, Kaylee? Just what here merits engine wine and your shiny smile? Was a gorram farce to be truthsome. Kinda like the arm cast she’d wear awhile longer. Rest o’ the crew done decorated the plaster with dumb jokes and picture-drawings, autographin’ her as though it meant somethin’, changed somethin’. Hell, even Mal printed ‘Captain’ in big, black letters, sketchin’ some manner o’ bird below.

Jayne hadn’t wrote a damn thing. What would it matter? Didn’t, to be plain.

Squatting, he’d watched through the window as the doc cut loose her leg. It emerged from out the plaster, a fine sprinkling of dark hairs in the spots the cast had covered. Jayne stared at the pale limb, all white and scaly, and felt a merciless stab of lust hit his nethers. From her perch atop the exam table, River looked down on herself and burst into tears.

“River?” Clueless, the doc started right in feelin’ up her leg for out-sticking bones or some such. For all his smarts, boy just didn’t get it. Didn’t get that what was hurtin’ her weren’t medical.

Nara seemed to understand. In a way, she always understood folk. Must come from

Comments
Monday, 27 March 2006 03:22
FIRST REVIEW????

Wow. The build up increases... WRITE MORE RIGHT NOW DAMMIT.

My concrit abilities fail in the face of the cliffhanger. sorry.
Monday, 27 March 2006 03:39
> “Stop! As your captain, I am ordering you to stop that. Stop talking and...and put your hands in your pockets!”

Bwahahahaha! Oh, excellent exchange!

And Simon with the baby. Serious awwwww! His conversation with Zoe was great.

Hmm, Mal's father...

>"Of course. Mal?”, "Yeah, cupcake?”, “I may slap you after all.”

HOWL! Oh, that conversation was lovely!

How about a little S/K action to go along with the M/I? :)
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 27 March 2006 03:48
ooooooo the tension....the last bedroom scene between Mal and Inara was as painful as it was heated. So sad...

but there was seriously fun moments to. Balancing it very well, m'dear!

**Gideon found himself watching what looked to be the beginnings of sci-fi porn. ***

lmfao, i had some BAD images come to mind with this phrasing...ai ya...

syzg
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 27 March 2006 04:28
yeah! my weekend fix! wonderful as always! just when i think things are gonna calm down, you bring up the excitement again.

please keep sharing - this is my favorite fic!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 27 March 2006 04:49
The only problem I have with this is the 7 day wait until another installment.

I waited all weekend for this!!!

This is so painfully well woven. The mystery, the romance, the sex (that last M/I scene-oy!).



ANONYMOUS
Monday, 27 March 2006 04:50
hehehe. popping corn.
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 27 March 2006 05:14
Yay! I was wondering when you were going to post more. More buildup is right, I can't wait to see where all this is leading.

Very sweet (and hot) moments between Mal and Inara. *sigh*
Monday, 27 March 2006 05:51
Oh...damn....have to follow the crowd here and say "GUH" for the M/I coupling before Mal and Gideon do a Butch and Sundance impression.

BTW, are we psychically linked? Cuz I swear you have used ideas I have been finetuning for a fic of my own several times in this fic:( Still, you do the concept all manner of justice, Kaynara;)

BEB
Monday, 27 March 2006 06:27
Yay, another chapter. It wasn't necasarily my favorite, but the filler parts have to be there to get you from point a to point b. I really, really liked the last part there though, when he's saying good-bye to the crew and he tells Kaylee to take care of both his girls.
Monday, 27 March 2006 07:48
Thank you for this story. I hate it, and love it, because I have absolutely no idea what will happen next. I'm mesmerized by all the little threads weaving together.

Book? Agent Gray? Vera? Matty? I'm eating Oreos of frustration trying to guess where you are taking the BDHs next.

And I want poor little River to be happy with Jayne. You made me cry for her. I don't think she can take much more.
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 27 March 2006 08:39
This is SO good!!! I love your Mal/Inara interaction---it seems very real to me. Wonderful storytelling. Thank-you!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 27 March 2006 10:13
*is speechless*
*whimpers*
Brilliant chapter as always. Loved the M/I as usual, and indeed, that last scène with just the two of them was bittersweet.
And poor River (and with that, poor Inara!)
Now, hurry with that update! :p

CCke
Monday, 27 March 2006 10:19
Yowzer, way to rack up the tension! Really love this though some sections it was a bit confusing following who was who and such, worth the figuring though. I absolutely adore Mal and Inara being together and confessing their love for each other and poor River. I'm hoping this doesn't end badly like the opening of Pandora's box. Not gonna get a lid on it once that pile of trouble has been opened. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 27 March 2006 11:01
wow, wow, wow that was great twists and turns loved it and cant wait for the next

when are jayne and river going to do it? i can see it building
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 27 March 2006 11:44
wow. let me say that you've made my week. you are so talented. I really loved carly's dream/expo. Still not sure bout Jayne's Jo & Vera. Ah all the pleasure/pain of the Jossverse... but you made me laugh:

“Means you’re bein’ stupid with the gettin’ sexed regular,” Jayne offered helpfully.

“Now that ain’t fair, Zoe.” Kaylee shook her head. “Cap’n’s said and done plenty o’ stupid stuff ‘fore he got to sexin’ Inara.”
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“God?” she repeated dully.

“Him who bestowed the masculine race with upper body strength. And, of course, the penis.”

“Of course. Mal?”

“Yeah, cupcake?”

“I may slap you after all.”

“Anytime you’ve the inkling.”
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 27 March 2006 12:27
Ohhhhhh I loved it! So many twists and turns, and the sexin' gah!

More soon????????????

JennS
FUNKYINFISHNET
Monday, 27 March 2006 12:32
As always I am enthralled with your work. Love how Caroline is slowly putting together what happened by dreaming of childhood memories. Great intriguing beautiful emotional stuff. I'd love to read a Mal/Inara wedding (how fun would that be?!) Keep it up
:- )
WINTERHART
Tuesday, 28 March 2006 00:13
Oh my...I had goosebumps all while reading this. You're an incredible storyteller, and I cannot for the life of me figure out what's going to happen next.

Which all just adds up to you needing to write more :) Please?

Tuesday, 28 March 2006 00:23
Beautiful job! I just loved it, but I'm thinkin' you need spew warnings. I sprayed my computer screen with the tea I was drinking after the start of this bit:
“Sir, I seem to recall seein’ your face more than my own husband’s in that honeymoon was spent in the second shuttle.”

“That’s just ‘cuz Wash’s face spent the whole week an’ a half betwixt your--”

That's when I started choking with laughter. :)

Please keep up the good work! (Damn! gotta wait another week for the next bit.) :-)
Tuesday, 28 March 2006 06:54
Wow... tons of twists. Especially the one with Book... This could get pretty interesting. Good development with Mal and Inara maybe a little more with Simon and Kaylee... It has been a while with the two of them! *Wink*

Overall really well done... Can't wait for the next installment!
SERENITYCREWELLY
Friday, 31 March 2006 02:55
Once again *sniffle* on the speech between Inara and Mal. Sweet Buddah I love those two.
That last part what River whispered? SO SAD!!!
I can't believe he's leaving! And what the hezmana with Book being the dude from the Reynold's past??
Can't wait for more!
~SCE
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 01 April 2006 23:18
I come to this site for one reason - to see if you've updated this story. I can't tell you how much I love it.
Please write more soon.
Wednesday, 31 May 2006 13:51
“Inara’s playin’ football?”
“Yup.” Kaylee sounded mighty proud with herself.
“Inara Serra? Dark-haired creature ‘bout yay high?” He held his palm level with Kaylee’s head. “Wait a minute, never mind Nara. Simon’s playin’ football? Stuffy-shirt doctor about--” He hesitated, uncertain. “Well, now, how big is the doc?” he mused.
BWAHAHAHAHAHA!!! brilliant, as usual!!

b

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