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Past and Present

Monday, October 16, 2006

Fluff-angsty little standalone. Post-BDM. Mal/Inara. PG-13.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3626    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Past and Present

By Kaynara

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Fluff-angsty little standalone. Post-BDM. Mal/Inara. PG-13.

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“C'mon, off with 'em.”

“You can't be serious.”

“You need help?”

“You're insane!”

“I'm known for that!”

“For God's sake, Mal, hush. Everyone's asleep.”

“That they are, darlin'. And unless you want an audience for what's about to happen here, reckon you best do your part quiet-like.”

“This isn't funny.”

“I'm not laughin'.” He swallows a chuckle. “We made a bet, Inara. You lost.”

“And I'm perfectly willing to negotiate an acceptable...trade. Just—Mal, not that.”

She lifts her face, all wide-eyed innocence.

That was the deal, as I recall. And you just lost ten hands of tall card in stunning succession. So, I repeat, off with 'em.”

“Wait, let's talk about this—”

“Not in the mood for talking. We men of action prefer, well, action. C'mon, Nara. What's the big deal? Not like this is a first for you. I mean, surely you've done this before...?”

“Of course I have.” She rolls seething black eyes at the roof of the cargo bay and wraps her arms about her torso.

“Well, then? Strip.” He grins and waits, resting his back on the wall.

She hesitates, and he can see she's a micro away from complying. Then her hands fly to the buttons of her shirt.

“I'm wearing a corset. Under my blouse.” Holding his gaze, she slowly unclasps the first button, and he catches a peek of something black and purple with lace trim.

His breath catches in his throat, and he's grateful suddenly for the length of his coat. He doesn't make it a point to tell folk this. Hell, ain't nobody's business. But Malcom Reynolds has always had a thing for corsets. Something about all that...lift.

“I had it custom-made on Sihnon years ago. It fits my body perfectly if you understand my meaning.” She smiles.

Lust is a punch to the gut, and he's fair sure she couldn't have done a better job of it if she used her fists.

“I could be persuaded to show you. Just a small glimpse. Come to my

Comments
Monday, 16 October 2006 18:37
Awww ... so warm and fuzzy and sad at the same time! I love the way you write Mal as a father - although why must Inara always be gone?

But I really loved this and I loved the contrast of showing him sledding with first Inara and then with Leila, that was great!

More please ...
Monday, 16 October 2006 18:43
Oh, that was just excellent. I LOVE that the scene with Mal and Inara was so similar to the one with Mal and his daughter. The crack about coveralls on the first date was SO perfect!

>“My dolls are on the winter campaign in New Kashmir.”

Now that sounded like River's influence on the little girl.

Nicely done!
Monday, 16 October 2006 23:28
Wow, break my heart why don't you? This was beautiful but oh so sad that Inara isn't alive any more and Mal is left to bring up their baby without her but it was also heartwarming too. Very shiny (sniff), Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 17 October 2006 02:53
Awww! You made me all teary! But it was worth it. I love seeing Mal as a father. It gives me a case of the warm and fuzzies. Thanks, Kaynara! Another fic well done!
Tuesday, 17 October 2006 21:27
Wow...you gotta have talent when you can write fluff and angst all in one story...and not have the shift seem obvious;)

Depressing that Inara died and so can't see Leila grow up...but at least she got to know her mum. Can only imagine the fun it would be for Mal to raise Leila and talk about Inara to someone who never got to know here:(

Still..you definitely smashed my expectations to pieces. Cuz here I thought this was gonna be something lighty smutty with Mal's comments about Inara losing a bet and having to strip;D

BEB
Wednesday, 18 October 2006 13:23
He didn't know till recently they make boots this small. He also didn't know they make 'em in periwinkle.
~ :D

Hell, she even kisses Jayne good night.
~ Now that's a hell of a woman

“That's what mama said. Except...Kaylee says she is now. An angel. Isn't that funny?”
~ Ah, a sad twist to everything.

Very sweet little piece, and I like the voice the story is told with, a bit different from the norm.
Friday, 24 August 2007 16:26
I can't help it, I'm a sucker for such a sweet little story. Thanks for sharing it and making my eyes mist over here!

:-)

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