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The Way Chapter Two

Friday, March 24, 2006

Jayne makes a decision that Mal seems intent on avoiding. Zoe realises a truth, River feels the truth and Kaylee is just beginning to discover the truth. Work in progress. Please let me know what you think, good, bad and the ugly.

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The Way Chapter Two - by ArtemisPrime

Disclaimer: All things related to Firefly/Serenity are the property of Joss Whedon et al. I’m not making any monetary credit off this. Just playin’ is all.



The morning was cold, leastways colder than he was accustomed to. He could see his breath frosted in the air and his mug of coffee steamed in his gloved hand. He pulled his coat further around him with his free hand as a shiver went up his spine.

The world was quiet this morning without even a bird to break the silence. Pausing in his scan of the rough landscape, Mal could hear footsteps, heavy on the metal floor, from inside. He took a sip of the drink and let it warm his insides.

“Decision’s done, then?” he asked as Jayne took his spot near the Captain.

“Yep,” came the slow reply.

Mal nodded casually as though this were an everyday occurrence. He finished the rest of his coffee then faced the mercenary. “All right then.”

Jayne re-positioned his rucksack on his shoulder. He never much cared for saying good-bye and this time was no different. “Well.” He cast his eyes down, not focussing on anything in particular.

“Well.”

With a quick look to the eye and nod, Jayne tromped down the landing plank once more re-positioning his pack. Mal watched him a moment then hit the close button. He didn’t quite understand what he was feeling at that moment, whether it was relief or sadness, but he knew that decisions, once made, were best left to be carried out.

Jayne never turned when he heard the engines rev louder for take-off nor when he felt the gust of updraft as the ship went into atmo. No, he had someplace else he needed to think on. Past was done; no sense in thinking any more on it.

For one moment, though, Jayne allowed himself a little remembrance. No guns this time, he thought. Words were passed and now the deal’s done. Weren’t nothin’ to it.

But there was something to it, he could feel it in his gut. This wasn’t like the last time he changed locales; no gunpl

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 24 March 2006 02:09
This is really good. Sad, but I like to see a little of the Jayne underneath all the bluster. Keep it up!
Friday, 24 March 2006 03:19
I'm really feeling for Jayne right now. He's keeping everything so bottled up, it ain't right.

I like that River looking out for him in her own special way, and that the rest of the crew is starting to realize that something's up with the big merc - that there's more to him than meets the eye.

Fabulous piece of writing. More please.
Friday, 24 March 2006 05:56
Excellent stuff here....always knew Jayne had to be more than what he appears...probably a rocket scientist in that man-ape skull of his

BEB
Friday, 24 March 2006 07:26
Poor, poor Jayne. I hope once he has done what needs to be done at home that he will go back to Serenity. Just wouldn't be the same without him. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 24 March 2006 10:36
Oh Jayne, poor guy. I'm glad River is understanding and that Kaylee offered to help.
MERCENARYSONG
Saturday, 25 March 2006 22:42
Loved the Jayne centric fic. Totally enjoyed it. Great believable incite into Jayne. You nailed him and the other characters. Awesome job.

Thanks for sharing such a great story...looking forward to seeing what happens next...

Thursday, 30 March 2006 11:56
Don't usually like Jayne-centric stuff, but this is the first piece I've read which really captured the Jayne we saw at the end of Jaynestown.

Very nice.
Friday, 31 March 2006 21:06
Very well done AP. I'm liking the depth you're giving to his character that we never got 'cause of the gorram idiots at f*x that cancelled the shiniest show ever.
Friday, 12 May 2006 01:16
I loved the Jayne/Kaylee interaction. Once again, fabulous writing. It flows really nicely and tells a nice story.

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