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The Storm - Chapter Two

Saturday, December 8, 2007

Mal assesses the damage done to his ship and crew after the blizzard crash.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2648    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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With the loss of the ship’s engine, the howling wind was causing quite a racket. Mal staggered down the steps into the fore corridor on his way to the engine room. Cutting through the kitchen, he was relieved to see Zoe in the lounge chair, strapped in good. She nodded to him to continue on. Looking down the corridor to the engine room, he could see, even with the dim emergency lighting, that it was a mess.

“Kaylee?” he called. “Talk to me, mei-mei.”

His mechanic lurched over some fallen material, her hand to her head. Blood trickled from a cut on her forehead. She eyed Mal. “I’m okay, Cap’n, but Serenity...” Mal could see her face screwing up into pain. “She’s not too good.”

Mal wrapped a comforting arm across her shoulders. “Don’t you pay no never mind to that right now. Go get yourself to the Doc to get that head looked at, dong ma?”

She nodded weakly and glanced back at the engine room. It was a complete shambles. Acrid smoke and sparks gave it a spooky glow. Tools and small parts were strewn across the floor. At least the engine looked to be intact. Mayhap be only a power line was cut or another catalyzer was needed to get it turning over again.

The pair took shakey steps down to the infirmary level, and Kaylee gasped at Simon lying on the medbed with River doing a sort of examination. The younger woman eyed them and waved them in. Kaylee stepped over the tossed medical supplies and equipment to take Simon’s hand.

“He alright?” Mal asked from the doorway.

River nodded. “Whiplash. Sleeping now.” She smiled at her friend. “Wanted to find you, but you were playing with the engine.”

The mechanic stroked Simon’s cheek and smiled at his disarrayed hair. She felt River’s finger nimbly touch her forehead. She pulled back. “Ain’t nothin’.” Her eyes went a little crossed and she wobbled on unsteady legs.

“Oh no, Kayl

Comments
Saturday, 08 December 2007 04:43
Very interesting! Looking forward to more. How did they lose Jayne?
Saturday, 08 December 2007 10:44
I most definitely like! And the little touches of humour even while they're in the midst of a severe problem are excellent, like Zoe being unable to free herself from the restraint, and Kaylee wanting to pet the pony, daddy. Concussion or what?
Saturday, 08 December 2007 15:27
Yes, I think Kaylee definitely has a concussion, a bruised brain pan. Wonder where in the nine hells Jayne is? Hope he is okay. I did smile at River taking over Simon's duties while he is out for the count but at least none of the crew we have seen so far appear too seriously injured. Just hope to good gorram I haven't spoken too soon. Ali D :~)
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