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Bones break, words crush - part two

Sunday, April 22, 2007

The immediate after-effects of the Big Blunder by Simon. The first part can be found <a href="http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=14676"here</a>.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3286    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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The chill of the dawn had seeped into Simon’s frame. He’d spent the night camped out on the floor of the hold of the ship waiting for Kaylee to return, to apologise profusely over his words. He awoke with a yawn and gazed over at his sister sleeping next to him. He couldn’t help but smile. She’d had such a good time at the party, despite his fretting. She’d danced the whole night and had worn herself out completely. She hadn’t stirred at all when her brother had pushed back her hair from her face or had put a proper pillow under her head.

His eyes had narrowed, though, when he draped Jayne’s coat over River. He had been out there, with Kaylee.

Determined to speak with Kaylee, to get her to see reason over his mistake, he summoned his courage. Jayne could beat him to the end of time for all he cared. He wasn’t going to lose Kaylee, not after all the crew had been through.

Simon rose and stormed down the ramp. He was not going to play second to Jayne. He was not going to lose to a trained ape without the training.

The brave, rational thoughts came to an abrupt halt when he took in the tableau at the side of the ship. The air around him grew cold.

“You,” he began. “You...gorramn...hun dun. You God forsaken ta ma duh hun dun!” Shaking off the frost biting at his skin, he reached for Jayne’s collar and attempted to haul the man up. He succeeding in tearing the thin shirt.

“What the...?” Jayne’s groggy voice called. He blinked once then was up in an instant at the threat. He twisted Simon’s wrist, still clinging to the torn cloth, until the doctor squeaked in pain. “Don’t take very well to folks aimin’ t’duke it out so early in the morn,” Jayne’s voice breathed onto his face.

Simon blinked furiously, the heat of Jayne’s breath burn

Comments
Sunday, 22 April 2007 04:13
oh, fun! but are you ever going to say why simon was calling for inara... i'd sure like to hear his side.

"She scrunched her nose as though she smelled something Mal had cooked." <--- props for this line. It cracked me up.

shiny good fun
Sunday, 22 April 2007 05:06
More, need more.
Sunday, 22 April 2007 09:15
Yes, I want to know why Simon calling Inara's name, not Kaylee's. I'd say he has more explaining to do than Kaylee. And yes, Jayne is right, Kaylee does deserve better so Simon had better shape up and put things right. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 22 April 2007 20:38
Ya know, I never thought much about the Simon and Inara thingy, beyond shipmates, until I read "Dead or Alive" (the unfilmed script.)...so I can see where your going with this. The three of them would have made one awkward triangle. Toss in Jayne and Mal to really complicate things.
I would love to hear Simon's explanation.
Monday, 23 April 2007 01:47
Oh...I am truly split here, ArtemisPrime! As it sits, I gotta say Kaylee is probably better off with Jayne...but I really wanna know what caused Simon to call out Inara's name when in Kaylee's company. I doubt the "true" reason would really help this situation, but I really think that Kaylee needs to at least know for certain Simon was voicing her true desires before tossing Simon aside.

That being said, why do I get the feeling that Jayne will try and prove the idea of being with him is better than Mal's cooking, sensation-wise?

;D

BEB

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