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The Best Deceptions: Ch 8

Saturday, March 18, 2006

Jayne/Kaylee... the Frye household... Serenity...

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3707    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Really short chapter, but short is better than nothing, no?

Sorry about the long wait between drinks, people, this one wasn't talking for a long while.

Then it kinda did. Chapter eight brings you mostly set up. I won't make you wait so long for the next part.

Disclaimer: The shiniest dolls aren't mine, the ones with scuff marks all over 'em, (you know the ones, with the little blue pen marks on their arms and the hair that's just that little bit skewiff and toes that have been chewed by the dog), those are mine.

Rating: This one... G. Fluffapalooza.

Comments: Seriously, FLUFFAPALOOZA. And I'm sorry to leave it there. It just happened.

Feedback: Is my crack. Comment here or email: wily_one24@yahoo.com.au

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CHAPTER EIGHT

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"Ow."

Jayne cracked an eye open at the voice down at the end of the bed.

"I know, sweetie, I tried to tell him." Kaylee answered softly, her voice was light with laughter. "Now hold still a minute and don't wake him up."

"Too late." He growled, shuffling up onto his elbows. "How the ruttin' hell did you get in?"

"Jayne!" Kaylee hissed as Lilly giggled.

"Sorry, kid." He leaned his head to the side so he could rub his eyes awake, then frowned down at the two girls, sitting crouched at the end of the bed. "What happened?"

Lilly had her leg stretched out and Kaylee was in the middle of cleaning what looked to be a scratch of sorts. Their faces,

Comments
RAVENHAIR
Saturday, 18 March 2006 15:19
Yea! On with the story! Everyone's so fluffy cute...what a nice way to start the day.

Can't wait to see the crew's reactions!
HUMBUG
Saturday, 18 March 2006 15:27
I was just checking what new fanfic had been posted here - and I find the next chapter of The Best Deceptions!!!!

Shiny - Thanks Jacqui!!!!

Short, but sweet - I'm looking forward to the chapter 9, where the crew get to meet Kaylee's family and see what's been going on between Jayne & Kaylee......

How will Mal react...... and Simon..... ??

I know you've been busy with other fanfic & fanvids, but please finish this one off too..... I just love it!!!
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 18 March 2006 15:55
Oh at last!

Jacqui this is so great...and I can't wait to see where it goes. But I also love your "Didn't mean nothin'" series...and I don't know which I'd rather you'd write!!

Write Both!!

Thanks for sharing
Hazel
SWEETSERENDIPITY
Saturday, 18 March 2006 18:48
There's just something about a sneak attack upside Jayne's head! Go Mom! Just shiny, Jacqui! Keep 'em comin!
SQUISH
Saturday, 18 March 2006 20:14
Oh yay! Finally another chapter for this! I'm wondering how many of the crew will have a clue just from seeing Jayne or Jayne and Kaylee together(well, besides River of course). Mal will probably have to shoot something! Hope your muses keep talking!
ASHLAN
Saturday, 18 March 2006 20:41
yay!!! can't wait to see all their faces when they find out bout kaylee and jayne!!

oh i hope simon does somthin stupid and eats a little dirt. don't really care by who... but...

anyways. love the fluff.. ah hell who'm i kiddin, i just love jayne.
KAIE
Saturday, 18 March 2006 22:36
YEAH!

So happy to see this series again! Can't wait to see how everyone reacts to Jayne and Kaylee coupleness!

Everything you write is sooo shiny!

Keep going!
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 19 March 2006 01:30
Wonderful, as always! I love Mama Frye!

- Vivian
CANTONHEROINE
Sunday, 19 March 2006 09:15
Yay! *does happy dance*

I was so excited to see that a new chapter was posted, I actually held my breath while I read it. (Don't worry, I'm a fast reader. I didn't pass out or anything ;P).

Great stuff, as usual, Jacqui. I especially loved this exchange:
“We landed?” He shot at them.
“Wait, what?” Wash looked from one to the other, his face stretched out in panic. “Someone’s supposed to be landing this thing? Why didn’t anyone tell me?”
Such a total Wash moment.

More as soon as you can, juat can't wait for those crew reactions. It's gonna be an interesting Christmas dinner.
CANTONHEROINE
Sunday, 19 March 2006 09:16
Ahem. *blushes* "juat" was supposed to be "just". I'm so excited I can't type straight.
HISGOODGIRL
Sunday, 19 March 2006 16:04
Made for a most cheerful morning, what with readin' and us gigglin' over coffee and pancakes. A right fair way to start a morning, Miss J.
BANZAIBILL
Sunday, 19 March 2006 17:59
Aaaaah. That's better! I needed that fix of Jacqui fluff.

God, I'm loving this. I want to know where it goes!

More! More!
PIXIE4MIRANDA
Monday, 20 March 2006 01:22
So looking forward to more, this is my favorite on-going fic

P4M
WINTERHART
Tuesday, 21 March 2006 06:15
Yay! More story more story more story more story *grin*
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 22 March 2006 18:38
I am personally going to blame you for the intense pain in my hand that resulted from pounding my fist onto the desk after that abrupt ending. Just sos’ you know.
Now I curl up onto a little ball waiting and hoping that next chapter is soon. Not that I would ever make any demands that would rush the creative process. So I’ll just be here. Curled into a little ball. Waiting. On you.

Vena
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 22 March 2006 23:12
I'm soooo happy to see this one moving along! You said before you know what happens when Serenity lands, so get cracking! After the Didn't Mean Nothin' Series, I hope you at least ADDRESS the Simon angle when the crew lands. Throw a little angst in for spice, but this time puhleeeeze give us the Jaylee fluff ending. Or I'll die.

I love your work.

/M
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 04 April 2006 22:56
i love it!
please please more! need fluff!
I cannot wait.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 12 April 2006 10:42
Love this story. I'm dying to see what happens when Mal finds out.
Did my freaking taxes this morning and consoled myself after with Jaylee fluff-which you do wonderfully, better than anyone. Of course, I haven't entirely recovered from the annual horror of parting with my money- I need a new chapter to help ease the pain some more. Pretty please?
A Jacqui fic always perks me right up so thanks for the stories.

Nancy
BELLONA
Sunday, 28 May 2006 14:12
missus frye rocks!!!

b

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