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Dream Sequence, chapter 12

Monday, March 13, 2006

The crew take a few minutes to relax and regroup in the cargo hold, but trouble soon follows Shepherd Book back to Serenity.

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The unsteady lurching of the makeshift platform might have proved nauseating had it not been for the relief of entering fresh air and arising out of the din of the coliseum into the quiet, soothing night sky. As they were slowly winched up to the ship, Simon handed Zoe a small vial.

"Break it under his nose," said Simon, nodding at the unconscious pilot whom Zoe was once again clutching in her arms. "Ammonia, might be all it takes to bring him round."

Zoe did so, looking around as she heard a groggy voice. "Pretty shiny rescue. I'm startin' to think you got a knack for this," Mal said weakly.

Zoe smiled and took his hand, gratified that this time he was able to grip it in return. He held on tightly and rolled onto his side with a slight groan. Zoe winced in empathy. "It would help if you didn't give us quite so much practice, sir."

"You criticizing my plans?"

"Not at all, sir," Zoe replied dryly.

"Who's flyin? Is - Kaylee's flyin the ship?" Mal asked, startled.

"Yep, and scared to death she's gonna slip an' crash, earn your undying wrath. A few words might not go amiss," Zoe replied.

"Undying gratitude, more like. Speakin' of which...." Mal's voice trailed off as he searched for the right words. Zoe squeezed his hand in understanding.

Zoe went limp with relief as she felt Wash stir slightly. The cable jerked as it came to a stop, holding them inside the ship as they watched the bay doors close beneath them. They were lowered to the floor with a clanging jolt that made Zoe cringe for Mal, and she reached up to release the net. It fell down to their sides.

None of them felt much like moving at first. Mal was the first to stir, pulling himself up to his knees and crawling off the platform, crumpling face first

Comments
Monday, 13 March 2006 11:33
Excellent, just excellent! Can't wait for the next gorram part. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 13 March 2006 12:17
Oh, great part!

Loved the exchanges between Mal and Zoe and Wash and Zoe, especially. Dead on and funny as hell. :)
Monday, 13 March 2006 13:26
Some great 'light hearted'/'laugh in the face of death', type comments.

Loving it!
Monday, 13 March 2006 21:34
Mal/Wash/Zoe scene is excellent! I could totally picture it, right out of an episode. Moment of lightness in the midst of much bad. Mal and Wash laying on the deck being loopy, too funny!
Tuesday, 14 March 2006 13:44
Another great installment, love the humour through the whole chapter, very Firefly like.
Sunday, 09 April 2006 18:55
AACK!!! FEDS!!!

b

and my favourite line:
"Tell - him -" he said, raising one finger and pointing it in the very general direction of the doctor - "drugs. They're fun."

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