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Heartbroken: Meili Long - Part 2

Monday, February 27, 2006

Plenty of loose ends to tie up before Serenity and Zirondelle dock at the Trahan Orbiter. Armand seems to have given himself the run of the ships again--hopefully without sharp objects this time--and Simon steps up... finally.

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Author's Note: This has suffered some re-writes as well. I finally figured out what the heck it is I'm doing with this.

All Firefly characters are the property of someone else. All original characters are copyrighted by yours truly. This is not in any way, means or intention meant to infringe on anybody.

The MIGHTY BIG APOLOGY still stands for anyone who can read and speak French, Cajun or Chinese. The translations as I understand them are included, although that doesn't necessarily mean it's grammatically correct. I leave out the more vicious Chinese swearing. Any browncoat worth their salt knows all those anyway, or at least where to find them.

Translations

Cajun/French

Ecouter, fre. Parti d'ici. Il vous tirera.: Listen, brother. Come away from here. He'll shoot you.

Fre – brother

Parti, Fre. Ce n'est pas l'endroit pour vous - Listen, brother. Come away from here. He'll shoot you

Laissez-le – Let him

Par la Providence – by Providence

Chinese

Wo dui wo zuo de shi gandao hen houhui— I feel very sorry for what I did

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Heartbroken: Meili Long - Part 2

Mal saw nothing but red--red, and the back of the stocky little fella who used to be a member of the Zirondelle crew and was currently standing a little too close to the heart of Serenity.

Storming into Serenity's engine room, Mal heard a little voice that sounded like Kaylee say, "Cap'n?" as he went by.

Mal took hold of Armand Garzon by the back of the neck with his left hand and shoved the muzzle of the gun in his right hand into the base of Armand's skull. The sound of the gun cocking and revving to fire fairly echoed in the engine room's tight space.

"I believe I put out a missive a few days back that said both engine rooms were off limits to non-crew," Mal said ominously. "That means you ain't supposed to be in here."

"Cap'n, he didn't hurt nothin'," Kaylee began. "He was just--"

"Kaylee, when I need

Comments
Monday, 27 February 2006 20:45
I already said it, but I love this. Armand is freaking me out, and nice on Simon worried about protecting Kaylee there in the end. More!!

- Soul
Monday, 27 February 2006 20:50
Ohh, nice chapter! Great Simon thoughts about Kaylee there.

That little scene with her appraising him as he stodd all sleep rumpled was just delicious! :)

And, what did that last french phrase mean!? There was no translation! Looking forward to more!
Monday, 27 February 2006 20:52
Thanks Soul - and thanks for the uber-fast beta read.

Leiasky - I'm letting those who read it figure out the last phrase. It should be pretty clear in part 3.
Monday, 27 February 2006 22:04
Me likey. :) Armand is a little freaky. (In a nice Riverish kinda way)

You can't let Inara leave. She needs to ssoothe the savage beast that's rising up inside Mal. (In more ways than one I'd guess :) )

Can't wait for part 3!!

Jenn
Tuesday, 28 February 2006 05:39
I read the original version and this is even better. You realy have the voices down. It's also nice to realize I haven't lost all my French.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 16 March 2006 13:15
Excellent. I've only just discovered your fics and I read them all today. They're brilliant and you really have all the characters written perfectly.

Can't wait for the next part. I'm just wondering if you're going to link this to the BDM or if you're discounting that to go AU?

Great fic!
Taya
Saturday, 24 June 2006 17:58
Thanks for the comments - as this does happen before the BDM, there will be links. I just read the graphic novels too, so there's more, obviously, to think about.

Rest assured, I would never discount the BDM. I'm a very linear fan - I don't believe in ignoring a piece of the story just because it didn't quite go the way I wanted. Those that do tend to do more harm than good to the fandom, and as browncoats know, you have to take all the bad along with the good.

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