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Heartbroken: Meili Long - Part 3

Thursday, November 30, 2006

Just how much can a captain take before he finally loses his cool? The events of Heartbroken and Melili Long from Rene Cariveau's point of view, and Simon gets a little foretaste of what is to come.

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Heartbroken: Meili Long - Part 2

All Firefly characters are the property of someone else. All original characters are copyrighted by yours truly. This is not in any way, means or intention meant to infringe on anybody.

This takes place after the events of Heartbroken, which takes place between Objects in Space and Serenity: The BDM.

The MIGHTY BIG APOLOGY still stands for anyone who can read and speak French, Cajun or Chinese. The translations as I understand them are included, except the more vicious Chinese swearing. Any browncoat worth their salt knows all those anyway, or at least where to find them.

I don't speak the langauges I'm dabbling in, so if my use of syntax is offending the French/French Canadian/Cajun speakers out there, then PLEASE, save me from myself!

French/Cajun

Me maudire pour un coullion - Curse me for a fool

C'est le temps pour se coucher, Fre - It is time to go to bed, brother

Oui. Dormir maintenant. Dormir seulement seulement--aucun rêver - Yes. Sleep now. Sleep only only - never dream

Très astucieux - very astute

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Heartbroken: Meili Long - Part 3

"Deux par deux, les mains de bleu."

Just about every night when he was sending his prayers up to Providence, Rene Cariveau had only a few clear-cut requests. That his lover--correction, his wife--and son and crew remain healthy and strong; that Zirondelle hold together and continue to faithfully serve her crew; for peace to continue to reign true in the 'verse--for better or for worse--and that once, just for once, a cargo run could go smooth.

"Deux par deux, les mains de bleu."

Apparently, that last request was too much to ask.

Since the Fall of the Independent movement and the end of the war, their troubles had generally b

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Friday, 01 December 2006 00:47
It feels like forever ago since the last part in this story, almost a shock to see you posting again but in a good way! Why do I keep thinking of Saffron when I think of Rowan? I hope the next chapters come closer together. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 01 December 2006 01:03
Oh boy...things just continue to get wacky, don't they? Get the feeling Rowan's eventual confrontation with her target (been awhile since I read the series, so the detail of who she is hunting is vague....Armand?) will be all kinds of not-fun:S

Great to see ya back in the saddle again, Channain! Been a while since you've posted a chapter of this...February 25 or so, according to your profile;D

BEB
Friday, 01 December 2006 16:51
Ali, thanks, as ever, for your comments. Rowan has a certain Saffron-like quality in her - the headstrong female on a mission sort of quality. She uses her wiles much the same way - as a means to an end. Rowan does have her own motivation, but we'll get to that.

BlueEyedBrigadeer, I don't believe I've had the pleasure of making your acquaintance, but as has been noted, I've been gone awhile. Thanks for reading my little story, and for your comments. There are definitely confrontations aplenty in store, and all kinds of not-fun. Wouldn't be Firefly fan fic without those two elements, now would it?

I just LOVE feedback!
Friday, 01 December 2006 18:55
Yay!! Finally!

Been waiting a long time for this, and I wasn't disappointed. I can't wait to see what happens next!!

- Soul

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