Roaring right on after Part 3
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MIGHTY BIG THANK YOU goes to Defender--my partner in crime who has always come through to help me make this thing the best it can be. She understands constructive criticism, same as I do :D
The MIGHTY BIG APOLOGY still stands for anyone who can read and speak French, Cajun or Chinese. I've added translations for a little Cajun and some of the Chinese I managed to make up on my own and didn't have to correct ( must be doing something right ) -
Cajun
kisa vou di - what you say
pa tschwe - no kill
pa aste - not now
Chinese
zhe buzhengque zai hen tuo - it's not correct in my head.
jao jile ji aode - that's great, perfect
yibao xiao yizhi - little pack of rats
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Heartbroken - Part 4
The infirmary seemed to reverberate in stunned silence as Cariveau and Siobhan stared at their injured crewman in complete shock. Simon’s expression contained nothing more than concerned inquiry, but Mal passed a hard look at his counterpart.
"Thought you said this Armand fella was dead," Mal said.
"No," Cariveau shook his head adamantly. "I did not. You did--or you implied it. Last we heard of Armand was Serenity Valley. We were told he was listed missing in action."
"He...he is alive?" Siobhan could barely say it. "After all this time?"
"You're sure it was him?" Cariveau asked.
Ellis nodded. "Sat across the dinner table from those eyes for a lot of years--I'd know 'em anywhere. Thing is, that's all I remember--Armand's eyes, then nothing."
Siobhan stared at him, only barely comprehending what Ellis was saying. "He stabbed you? Armand?"
"I don't... Zhe buzhengque zai hen tuo . It was Armand, but it wasn't. Eyes were right
You can't take the sky from me
That's our Mal with the little girl. He could charm the scales offin a gator.
The Cajun scenes are quite accurate as well.
Ooh, you're cliffhangers are evil.
Inara's part was really good, you captured her very well.
Keep flyin'
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