Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Heartbroken - Part 5

Tuesday, January 27, 2004

Who is Jian Wang and what in nine hells has happened to Inara?

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 5255    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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To Recap:

Serenity has answered a distress call sent out by Zirondelle, a Dragonfly class freight hauler with a fairly legendary reputation as a blockade runner during the war. Upon learning that Zirondelle is out of power and low on life support energy, Mal orders Serenity to join up with the ship and render aid. Enter Rene Cariveau, captain of the Zirondelle, and more than 80 refugees from Sayabec, a formerly independent fuel refinery station on Acadia Colony recently taken over by the Alliance. Things are barely stable when Mal discovers Zirondelle's pilot - and mother of Cariveau's son - is none other than the girl he promised to marry after the war. Compounded by Cariveau's first officer getting stabbed, Inara has also fallen victim which has put Mal on the hunt for what could be a former POW turned to some manner of fearsome creature by the Alliance. Plus, there's passengers with all manner of secrets to hide and a part of Book's past comes back to haunt him. Someday things are going to go smooth - this is not that day.

Disclaimer:

All Firefly characters are the property of someone else. All original characters are copyrighted by yours truly. This is not in any way, means or intention meant to infringe on anybody.

Author's Note:

MIGHTY BIG THANK YOU goes to Kristy for a quick and enthusiastic Beta read, and to her daughter Leora for helping with the French.

The MIGHTY BIG APOLOGY still stands for anyone who can read and speak Cajun or Chinese. The translations as I understand them are included, except the Chinese swearing. Any browncoat worth their salt knows all those anyway.

Glossary - Cajun and French/Cajun

Bet omitted v revini - Stupid to come back

Ne peut pas v garde pour eux maintenant...ne peut pas les sauver... - Can't watch for them now...can't save them...

Beb Tete dure – Stubborn Sweetheart

Frè panse qu'il doit inquiéter toute fwa - Brother thinks

Comments
Tuesday, 27 January 2004 20:42
Awww... Mal is such a gentleman. I like this story.
Wednesday, 28 January 2004 00:57
Excellent! I was beginning to dispair of there being more to this wonderful story. Hooray! Loved every bit of it especially how nothing is quite as straightforward as it might at first seem. Loved how Inara let her defences down with Mal after being shot. Sigh. I'm just a rutting shipper at heart. *Xiexie ni*, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 29 January 2004 04:55
Yay! Shiny newness!

I wasn't disapointed. Can't wait for the next installment.
Friday, 06 February 2004 02:45
This is my favorite Fanfic. I'm axiously waiting for the next installment.
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 14 February 2004 03:02
I swear, you guys, the other day I was looking for my DVD of this shiny story to get another look (like we DO, of our beloved Firefly) and then realized , Geez, it was a fanfic and was in my head...very well done, indeed...CAN'T WAIT FOR NEXT INSTALLMENT !!!
Camille
Sunday, 14 March 2004 01:18
Waah, the story isn't finished. Hurry with the rest before our curiosity kills us
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 29 April 2004 15:34
Hi Channain

When do we get the the latest installment or have I missed something :)
Thursday, 11 November 2004 09:00
You know, this ship was just MEANT to run into Serenity. Now you've got the good Shepherd tied to it.

The doc's scenes really stood out.

Keep flyin'

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